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by akashicrecord

schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Masterfully done
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh angsty, I like it. Byakuya/Rukia is an awesome pairing, keep at it!
person melrose
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This is...good! You should post it at the ByaRuki LJ community. :D
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Impressive. The conflicts Rukia feels are beautifully expressed. And as for the title, take the last line and call it "None Living" just a thought
person Arashijo
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was one of the best lemons I've ever read. Very angsty and yet so passionate. Great job! How about.. "Meant but Unspoken" as this fic's title?
person Estimate44
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poignant but lovely story!

kinda feel bad for Rukia, if you are writing an epilogue, plz give them both a happy ending, they both deserve it!!!!!!!
person demoneyeskyo
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good. i like it. it would be a very good idea to write more of these two. i admit, i'm a fan of these two too. it almost make me want to read your other naruto fics but i'm not a big sakura fan. perhaps you could write a nejixtenten one?
person Serpia-chan
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was awesome. It was so bittersweet, I've never read anything like it. You've got some seriou talent, and I really like how you write lemons, it was so ... soft. Supa job! (Hope to see an epiloue or something... hint hint :P)
Serpia-chan
person ^_^
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am NOT a rukia/byakuya fan but i really liked the story!

I feel terrible for rukia........she loves renji and renji loves her....

then there's byakuya =_=;;;...*SIGH*....at least he didn't do it by beating her.........

i've noticed that there's quite a few rukia/bya fics recently.

anywho, good fic! *flashes thumbs up*

i'd give u a title suggestion but i suck with making up titles ^^;;
person sup
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was pretty good