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for Helping a Friend

by E307

person Kera-Sama
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha!! I love the end!! ^^
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was very inticing.

And when you find out it's Kon at the end made me laugh entirely too much. XD Great Job

You get an +A
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I'm still grinning. Seriously, that ending is awesome. 5 million points. Well done. So much arse has been kicked by you and this story. Much admiration- for you and Kon :D
person Tennak
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great idea! I think it works perfectly with T. Kubo's original characters. Kon wants sex, Keigo seems to like Ichigo a lot and I would like to see the encounter between the real Ichigo and Keigo the next day in school. Well written and enjoyable! Thanks!
person Tabe
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA XDD Wasn't expecting that xDDD Good job~!
person evilchild (not signed in)
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When I read the lines:
“So that’s what you’re doing up here,” he said knowingly. The orange haired teen nodded, not looking at Keigo.

A quick glance at the front of Ichigo’s pants and he knew the orange haired teen’s hands were in his pockets for the same reason.

“What’s with you, Ichigo?” he asked in an amused tone, unbuckling his belt and opening his pants. The larger teen seemed to jump a little before starting to fumble with his own belt. Keigo thought he heard his friend mumble something about “not being told about this”, but dismissed it and batted the orange haired teen’s hands away.


I knew it was Kon because Ichigo would never do that (the watching girls and getting hard thing). I liked it over all. We don't get to read many IchixKeigo fics and it's refreshing when one is written. It was quite funny at the end when Ichigo asked what did he think he was doing.