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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nonsense! It was quite good! Hot!
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And absurdly fun to read :)
Great work!
Great work!
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about the "character development in the middle!" I thought it offered an interesting change of pace. The theme of the whole thing was very erotic. You chose the right element to develop.
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No you do not fail at smut! This is a glorious reunion of two well defined female characters. I love that you have made them clearly defined and easy to understand, so the smex is a natural continuation. Thanks for sharing this!