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November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Will CocoPuffs do? *grin*
I'd love for you to make this a series.
*puppy eyes*
I'd love for you to make this a series.
*puppy eyes*
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*mutters and swears at comp* If this doesn't post the second time, I'm gonna go find a hammer (for use on the comp) and sacrifice a plot bunny or two....
It's a great story, I love it, and would you please write more?
As for your needing a beta....
I'm sorry. If I had the time I would, but I don't....
So here's what I recommend if you can't find someone else to beta for you.
1. Use whatever spell/grammar check you can.
2. If you think a word's wrong and the spell check's saying it's right, check a dictionary or thesaurus. You can even find a thesaurus online if you need to. Ask someone else if you still can't figure it out.
3. If it's the character's way of speaking, feel free to use incorrect grammar and spelling, as long as readers can get the gist (or you explain it to them).
4. Many writers get mixed up when using "than" and "then." "Than" is a comparison term (this is better THAN that), while "then" is used for times and lists (Now and then. This, then that, and then those.)
Ask readers to point out errors you may have missed. We don't always think to, even perfectionists like I am.
May you have all the inspiration, innovation, and intuition you need. *blows good luck kiss to you*
It's a great story, I love it, and would you please write more?
As for your needing a beta....
I'm sorry. If I had the time I would, but I don't....
So here's what I recommend if you can't find someone else to beta for you.
1. Use whatever spell/grammar check you can.
2. If you think a word's wrong and the spell check's saying it's right, check a dictionary or thesaurus. You can even find a thesaurus online if you need to. Ask someone else if you still can't figure it out.
3. If it's the character's way of speaking, feel free to use incorrect grammar and spelling, as long as readers can get the gist (or you explain it to them).
4. Many writers get mixed up when using "than" and "then." "Than" is a comparison term (this is better THAN that), while "then" is used for times and lists (Now and then. This, then that, and then those.)
Ask readers to point out errors you may have missed. We don't always think to, even perfectionists like I am.
May you have all the inspiration, innovation, and intuition you need. *blows good luck kiss to you*
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the first part and this second part. I think continuing is a must! Please, please dear writer, I have this nice box of assorted chocolates that I'm presenting to you, from my humble position on my knees! Urahara always seems a little twisted and your version of him is nicely & deliciously evil. More of that please. Perhaps you should keep futher parts in the same overall story as I overlooked this second part for days until I suddenly realized that it was a continuation of a story I had read! Thanks!
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
We love working with Bleach fics, so being a beta for you would be all kinds of awesome fun.
This fic and its prequel are the kind that make us love reading fan fiction in general. :D
-T.A.
This fic and its prequel are the kind that make us love reading fan fiction in general. :D
-T.A.