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January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say that I enjoyed the second one much more than the first. The caliber of writing that you are exhibiting is going to rival a lot of big time writers on this sight. It's simply amazing. I like your angst and surreal style much more than your PWP's, and I believe you keep the characters much more IC and in depth than your PWP's.
Of course, my general distaste for Het (lesbian, haha) is widely known across the site, but I can handle it from time to time. I like your Yaoi fictions much more. I think you put more heart into them. Great job! I'm looking forward to more from you in this section.
Ja!
BrucesGirl
Of course, my general distaste for Het (lesbian, haha) is widely known across the site, but I can handle it from time to time. I like your Yaoi fictions much more. I think you put more heart into them. Great job! I'm looking forward to more from you in this section.
Ja!
BrucesGirl
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story, this was.
There was a whole lot of character developments going on, and you quite captured them easing into society once again. Although, I can't help but pity Uryuu... sixteen months of constant sex must be bad for the bottom of the pair, musn't it?
And because I'm a bad person, I feel the need to mention that male multiple orgasms are actually possible. 'Cause us girls don't exactly egaculate when we orgasm, so the two aren't nessecarily related, and apparently, if a guy has been holding back for a while, the penis can stay erect for longer periods of time.
(I'm such a dork.)
Keep writing more of this stuff, it's fluff, smut, and humor all wrapped into one! Very enjoyable read.
--R.A.F.B
There was a whole lot of character developments going on, and you quite captured them easing into society once again. Although, I can't help but pity Uryuu... sixteen months of constant sex must be bad for the bottom of the pair, musn't it?
And because I'm a bad person, I feel the need to mention that male multiple orgasms are actually possible. 'Cause us girls don't exactly egaculate when we orgasm, so the two aren't nessecarily related, and apparently, if a guy has been holding back for a while, the penis can stay erect for longer periods of time.
(I'm such a dork.)
Keep writing more of this stuff, it's fluff, smut, and humor all wrapped into one! Very enjoyable read.
--R.A.F.B
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a great sequel! i would have loved to read about ishida's reunion with his dad, but it was still so very good without that. thanks for writing this, it had such a sweet ending!!