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by Brightside

schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of Ichigo/Ryuken! Never thought of that before and the fact that Ichigo is the top makes it wonderful [and not creepy XD] Very well written, love it. Would love to see more!
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schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHE. Awesome. Nicely done.
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woah! it was the second time around that I caught the last line that ichigo wouldn't be as good as his father. man, that implication is totally amusing....but yet kinda sad.

twas VERY hot! I liked it!
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Made sense to me! But then again I think in elliptical ways ^^. I guessed Ichigo right away, and the ending wasn't a surprise. I actually like both pairings (I loooove Ryuuken and the only one I can't bear to see him paired with is his own son). Some hot stuff here. Very precise imagery even if there wasn't a storyline. More PWPs could be like this, because it's hard to be turned on if you can't understand who's in what position and what the heck is going on.
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're right. It didn't make sense. But it was good anyways. Very hot. I very much liked. As I pretty much do anything Bleach you write. A pairing I never really thought of before, but hey, it works for me. Great job.