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for _The Girls_

by debbiechan

schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM

for Vixen--your email is hidden so I'll have to answer you here. "After You Died and Even Before That" isn't on this archive because it's a no-sex story. You can find it at my website http://www.debbiechan.com or at Live Journal here: http://community.livejournal.com/bleachness/tag/after+you+died+and+even+before+that
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't seem to find "After You Died and Even Before That" Is it still up? Could you send me a link? I feel like i am missing half the story
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh that was soooooooo good and perfect! i loved it so much, and rukia's rant about modern day humans was quite entertaining. thanks for sharing such a wonderful fic!
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY for make-up sex!

that was so sweet <3
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I did laugh, but only because I find foot fetishes hilariously funny. And that's because I watch the Paparabu LJ community. But, anyway, I would like to congratulate you on completing a wonderful, thought-provoking read ^____^ I enjoyed it a whole lot. Keep writing, I love seeing stuff from you.

-R.A.Z.B
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bravo for you putting the girls in. wasn't long but hey its better than some characterizations i've seen.

I'm looking forward to the next part!
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that is the most evil cliffie i have ever come across!! but this part was such an emotional rollercoaster! for me anyway. i want the boys to be happy and together and whatnot. their current thinking is just breaking my heart. meaning, great job! i look forward to the finale!
person 3Jane
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best things you've written, I think; the story is messy, conflicted, and so very real in how their love story affects everyone around them --- it's just so masterful, and your characterization is so dead on. You're raising the bar for all of us! Thank you for posting, because this ... this is beautiful. :)
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's just getting better!

You have a wonderful way of developing the characters in your own style and making them seem still oh-so-perfect, as if you've ripped them straight out of the manga.

Great job! I can't wait for part 3!

--R.A.Z.B
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i don't even know what this is. is it sad? is it sweet in a depressing kind of way? who knows? but i do love it, and eagerly await part two!!