rate_review Reviews

Could just be me in google chrome, but i can't read the story. it's all over the place on text size and broken codes litter just the first chapter alone.

I really like how you write Orhime. Also I really enjoy the way you use japanese in the correct way, and you provide the reader with a glossary at the end. That's very helpful and it gives the story an authentic flavor.

Orhime has a lot of depth in just these 2 chapters alone. I will definately read more soon! She's sadly overlooked and not appreciated by the fandom, and she has such potential. It looks like you'll be developing that here.

Not bad. As a point of detail, Sora would not call Orihime nee-chan. That's a title for an older sister. Otherwise, pretty good.

This story is great and I love how you brought Grimmjow back to life. Can't imagine Orihime without him sometimes. I can't wait for the next chapter and love how you put this entire story together.

this story has been freeking awesome, and i cant wait to read the last chapter keep working hard girl

yeah for new chap! The only thing I hate about fics with story lines like this, is that I know the wait for the next part is going to be killer :-( Looking forward to the next one though :-)

I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER FOR AN UPDATE!

And now I have it =D

To bad it was a filler *groans* but fillers ALWAYS lead up to something so fantastic..that words cannot describe such thing.

Good job! Keep writing!

I wish Orihime could've been more honest with Ichigo, but her not telling him what's wrong in order to protect him seems like something she would do. But her efforts were in vain because Hallow Ichigo is back. What is she going to do now?

Whoa! I just started watching Bleach today and I'm already hooked on Ichigo/Orihime! I like this story already. I'm not familiar with the manga, but I like where this story's going. What a great opening chapter! Very sexy, but bittersweet.

Just had to give myself a slap on the wrist... Ive gone over this story a few times but never stopped by to show my appreciation. I really like what you have done with the characters, and except for exceptions to character growth, though they were pretty true to the source. Additionally, Hallow hime is one of the strangest characters I have seen, and her interactions with ichigo's hallow really makes you think about her role in the series. In short looking forward to updates and agree with previous posts that you deserve far more review love than you have been getting!