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for Seireitei Monogatari

by Crya2Evans

person Yakumo
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Stark and Byakuya, huh? Interesting pairing.
person Kuromei
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_____O Byakuya? In chains?? OMG They weren't taking him to be executed, were they??? @_____@;; H-he was just going to be imprisoned, right? ^__^;;

.... What the hell did he do? 8|

Honestly, that was more surprising than having Stark as his lover. And there are so many questions! .... Most of which I've already asked in this review. lol X3 Just one more, though:

How in the world did Stark get into Kuchiki's hakama? O_o;;
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Flails about and dies* I so loved this chapter, even on my fifth reading (or this the sixth?) Anyhow, can you please write another beautifully absurd story like this again sometimes soon? Please?
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ah, the sweet feel of good fanfiction...it comforts my overly worked soul.
no, seriously, your updates cheers me up after hours of work ;3

and now, comments. I loved the Urahara/Kensei chapter.
Epic win on Uruhara's part. using a kiss that way is sly, almost cheating...typical Urahara XD
But in a way, Kensei didn't loose either*grin*

The Byakuya/Stark chapter was sad...nice, but sad.
Poor Byakuya. Someone should hug him
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Always awesomely done. Can I bow at your feet and worship you?
person Emzzzz
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kensei/Urahara my, my, my, such delicious potential. I hope to see more of them; excellent writing as always.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I so didn't see that coming, which is quite nice *wicked grin*
I really loved the tone of the story, it was quite heartrending and poignant and a whole lot of other adjectives I don't need to write here since I'm sure you already know. It would be lovely if you expanded this, but on the other hand the brevity of this piece is what will make it linger in the mind for a very long time after reading.
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Then again, for his age, Ichigo was remarkably out of touch with his libido." This made me lawl all over the place. XD
person Yakumo
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD YES!!! KENSEI!!! He's so sexy...<333 I hope you decide to write MOAR with him. ^o^ Please excuse my excitement...>.>;;
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hanky at the ready......good LORD woman!!

that was HOT, and it was without the sex!! i wonder just much MORE HOTTER it can get!!?!?!?!

and YES, a sequel will be needed. to make the blood flow as it were..............

*ahem*

i am just...uh.......gonna go now.

Laters! and good luck to the writing books deal!

miko ~_^