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for Seireitei Monogatari

by Crya2Evans

person Emyrei
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've said it before, but I love the background stories you write.

You are rapidly making Aizen mah very speshul favourite puppeh!
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pure crack indeed!

but a good way of looking at the additiude of this captain. he just seems so, misunderstood, out of all of the captains. and demented enough to be dangerous to the populations of all the worlds.

i really enjoyed myself over this fic. great job!\


laters!

~_^ miko
person Kuromei
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lmao Not even a wrist brace can keep me from commenting on Sousuke's slow spiral into villainy. lol XD Yes, it's total crack, but I needed a dose of funny to keep me up long enough to get to the store. ^w^ You're timing couldn't have been better! =D

See you next time, Draco-san! XD *hugs*
person Yakumo
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice job! I've always wondered what it was that made Aizen evil. ^_^
person Kuromei
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O//w//O *stuggles not to laugh like a hyena* "Sweetcheeks-san"?!? Ah ha ha, ah ha ha ha ha haaaaaa~! XD *falls out of her chair*

*gives thumbs-up from the floor*
person Emyrei
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Makes me wonder what Ikkaku's secrets are. :P
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ya know this part is my fav....just because i KNEW it!!!

"Zaraki Kenpachi, for example, his very own captain, had a secret obsession with reading trashy romance novels of the Harlequin variety. You know, the ones with beautiful girls in the arms of brawny men on the cover. In fact, he hid them under the floorboards in his bedroom, right beneath where he kept his futon.

And the fact that Yumichika was actually a natural blond. But he felt that it didn't suit his complexion, so he'd been dyeing his hair for as long as Ikkaku had known him. Top and bottom so that no one could find out the truth. Vain bastard. He spent a fortune on hair dyes, making sure that his roots would never be discovered. And yet, he had the audacity to mock Ikkaku for his lack of hair. Someday, he was going to pay for that."

like i said, my absolute FAV!!!!!

this part was the best. and i think that Renji or Ichigo might notice, but at a VERY late part of discovery!!


MUHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA.

*ahem*

n-e-ways......i need to go.

laters!

miko ~_^


person Yakumo
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! Tousen cross dresses, Iba likes Ikebana and Soifon and Isane are actually huge sluts. I love it. xD
person Synthetic
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how I lol'd. I'm not sure who my favorite is - it's between Byakuya's plushie fetish and Ukitake being a thief. They were all lolarious though. Once again, you slay me. Keep up the good work! :D

-Synthetic
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, brace yourself because this is going to be long. I've been very neglectful in my reading, real life stuff kinda getting in the way. Finally I've found time to catch up and headed straight here, you even updated while I was reading so I had an extra one too. I've taken to writing notes while reading these just so that I remember everything I want to say and I seem to have written a lot. Here we go then:

118 - Love the Ulquiorra introspective, His very nature would stop him from ever understanding Ichigo properly. You capture him so well and I look forward to a continuation of this some day.

119 - Stark/Izuru my first reaction was 0.o but I really liked it. Loving the Stark love too, he is rapidly becoming one of my favourate characters in Bleach. I really want him to kill Gin and claim Izuru, he'd be much better for him than the freaky evil ex-captain. Internal sqeeing when Stark kissed him XD

120 - Love the banter between Ichigo and Grimm. Had to write this bit before I read the next part of the fic, while my brain was still working coherently 'Holy shit that is so hot, angry groping is nosebleed inducing and right now you are pure win. Have to go finish reading it now.' And once I had I loved how they went right back to the banter, it fitted perfectly. I loved that Grimm is affraid of the water and after Ichigo sort of pushed him in I kept expecting him to leap straight back out again, glad he didn't though. His internal meanderings as he tries to work out why he isn't more upset and annoyed at what just happened between him and Ichigo is really well done. I absolutely love this one.

121 - I love Toushirou. I almost feel sorry for him, he was so totally played by Unohana, she used an unfair tatic. You can't use the I'm-going-to-start-crying-any-minute-look on an unsuspecting man, they don't stand a chance of resisting when you do that. I thought it might have been Matsumoto's fault at first, it seemed liked something she would do after consuming copious amounts of sake.

122 - I don't blame Stark for inching away from the tea, most people would XD I was giggling within the first few lines. I love Kisuke flustered, it doesn't happen nearly enough. I love how Kisuke likens Ulquiorra's natural state of being to one of sulking, I'd never looked at it that way. He's not surly, just always sulking :) I was reminded of siblings squabbling and having to be seperated by their father or older brother when Ichi brought Grimm in. 'Shriek of fangirly joy' - this line, I love it!! I was there hearing it, it is such a brilliant description. I want to know how Ichigo did it and I would have paid money to see Aizen's face as he wrote that note. My favs have to be Grimm and Szayel mostly for the laughter they evoke, they are just perfect.

123 - Love the reference to the Aizen date and mentions of Izuru, I think we may be starting to get an idea of who'll be joining Ichigo for his second dates. It was very aww worthy and the fact that you not only married Hana off but made him a widow at the same time was very intriguing. It might be nice to see just what you had in mind as a wife for such a gentle soul. A very sweet offering and totally likable.

124 - Ahh Zaraki, ever the not so subtle one :P Liked this one a lot but then I am a fan of Zaraki/Ichigo. Ichigo's internal debate was good and the line about him fleeing for his sanity and the one in the summary that had him not so much wanting to save his life but his virtue were brilliant.

125 - Poor Ichi, you can tell he feels so betrayed by Kisuke and then to turn around and completely understand why he had been lied to is just so sweet. Wonderful handling of some deep emotions but then you always do that well.

126 - This was pure unadulterated win!! Ikkaku as the holder of the secrets is priceless and the secrets themselves are just so damn funny. I want to mention them all but that would be too much so just my favourates. Yumi as a blond *Gigglesnort* Zaraki reading trashy novels made me feel slightly distubed but still so damn funny. Bya-kun...sweetcheeks...oh dear lord I was in tears, that is just too funny. Tousen in heals 0.o and the whole mirror question, I don't think I stopped laughing. It only got worse when I got to Hisagi's tats being fake...

You are pure win on every level, your angst is amazing, your fluff perfectly sweet and your crack makes my sides hurt. I really enjoy your fics and I'm sorry that I fell so far behind. Congrats on the publishing, you're an amazing writer who totally deserves it. Good luck to you and I look forward to your updates whenever you can XD