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by Crya2Evans

person Anon
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*laughs**reads fic again**laughs some more*
I'm amazed at Renji's stupidity...nobody's THAT oblivious to the going-ons around them XD
and I approve of the make-out scene

and yay for UkiHara...victory for the crackpairing shippers
person Emyrei
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm kind of having a mental picture of you in my head....with one of those swirly-thingies they use for lotteries...only...the balls inside have the names of bleach characters instead of numbers.
And you just go *twirl twirl twirl* *ball rolls out* "uhuuuu....Ichigo again, you lucky sod. AGAIN AGAIN" *twirl twirl twirl* *One more ball* "...Yumichica....ummm...I'LL DO IT!!!!"

Because...sometimes, your pairings are THAT random.

Not that I am complaining.
This made me giggle. I liked it mucho much!
person Yakumo
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kissing boys! YAY! xD
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There are no words to even begin to describe how awesome that fic was XD

Right from the start when the thought knocked on the door it was just perfect. Shiro's quip at the end about him being so gay was just priceless and Yumi's last sentence, brill. I think Ichi showed remarkable restraint, I'd have strangled the bloody lot of them lol And Kenpachi putting his hand up to answer the question of who knew, I was in tears most of the way through that, I kept having to stop so I could wipe my eyes to see again.

You are the master Draco, please keep them coming XP
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this XDDDDDD

“I am sorry, sir. But I couldn't turn in my paperwork on time because my fan mail attempted to eat it.” - That line began the laughs and it all went downhill from there, the first letter he read was brilliant and I had to stop for a minute to gain some composure. The second letter was better, we got our answer and then to have the next line, 'that has nothing to do with this fic' - absolutely brill, pure win.

How much does Shunsui drink??? That is quite a bar tab. Oh and UkitakexUrahara, yes please ;P
person Kuromei
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lmao XDDD I-I can't stop laughing! X3 "My fan mail ate my paperwork." roflmao That's too rich! XD *continues giggling for a while* Hah... I love those crack fics you write. X3 So, so funny. *luffs on you* And yes, yes! Take that hint of Ukitake/Kisuke somewhere. ;3 I'd love to see where it could go in your hands! ^w^
person Yakumo
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This has to be my favorite one! I think you should have other stories about captains/vice-captains answering fan mail. xD That would be awesome.
person satterb
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're right, I do like Ukitake's point of view and inner voice. It was fun to try and guess whom the letters were from as quickly as possible before I found out for sure. I enjoyed that one, but I am looking forward to more of your smutty goodness!
person Emyrei
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a sucker for Ukitake/Shunsui myself, but I can't deny that Ukitake/Urahara sends a tingle through my toes.
Ukitake has an interesting taste in reading material.
Neatness on a stick. Huzzah.
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Toushiro...how you amuse me XD
Ukitake won't need to pay Shunsui's bar bills, he can just use the letter he got
to tie Shunsui up with and let him roll down towards the bar to fix his own money troubles ;)

lovely update.
Can I offer you a bribe to do a sequel to this?
I really wanna know how that trip to the beach with "Ki-kun" turned out.