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by Crya2Evans

person Anon
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh maaaaah gaaaaawwwd /(OAo)/
.......this was my reaction when I saw the pairing.
never in a million years would I have thought of those two together XD
but I really liked the way you wrote it (and Gin in all his psychotic glory),
I think a nice and fluffy spin on this pairing would have felt odd...
no matter how crackilishious and awesome it was.

Ibe
person Emyrei
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have never ever read this pairing before.
It's kind of....random.
But, you're right. I can't imagine it being a very happy or even remotely mutual one.
I think you wrote it as good as it can possibly get. And that's saying something.
You should be proud of yourself. :P

Psycho Gin....you just gotta love him.

schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When I saw the pairing in the update I was a little dubious but that was amazing. I love insane Gin, he is such a good character.

I loved Gin's description of Momo, completely acurate XD

Excellent as always ^_^
person Ranna
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gin is sooo creepy. I'm not sure if I love it or hate it.
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh that's so creepy!!! God I love Gin!!! X3 You absolutely amaze me at how well you can write the characters. And how differently! Like comparing this Gin to the one in Minuets to Midnight. Very different, but very the same. (I'm not very good at articulating my thoughts, am I?)
Anyways, I guess the point that I'm trying to make is that so many authors write a character the same no matter what, but the fact that you can adapt them to any story line perfectly and very convincingly is a truly admirable talent.
Keep up the amazing work!
Sincerest Salutations,
Darkness
person Yakumo
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not a big fan of Rukia but I love me some Gin. ^_^;
person Drace
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...O_O....*snicker*....*snort*....OMG! ROTFLMAO X 10!!!!! That is utterly....cute! I could just see it in my head, poor poor Hitsugaya....not....Beware the Candy Game young grasshopper..... Oh well, you could have chosen the Candlyland Edition of Monopoly....
person Bianca D.
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I could totally see Toushirou and Ichigo standing like that. Taking comfort in each other's presence, but not acknowledging it in a way that everyone else can tell. Lovely!
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fluff is cute and a welcome change.....and funny to a degree!!! muhahaahahah....ok need time alone!

laters! ~_^
miko
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY, i liked the newest chapter. not a fan of all pairings and see oyur story now at chapter 102 makes it hard >< to figure out whats where, any plans on a table of contents? COuld do it in AN at the bottom, chapter one put chatpers 1-10 at bottom and do same thing in chapters 11, 21 and on if you don;t want to take up one chapter with everything? arrgh, well whatever, hopefully i'll see this again later, thanks for the last chapter :) (chapter 102, hitsu/ichi)