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for Seireitei Monogatari

by Crya2Evans

person Kuromei
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... Separating "Never Been Kissed" and "Rukia's Dating Service" would make it easier to find my favorite chapters... Especially the one in NBK with Nemu's "scientific report." X3 *lols thinking about it* ...Uhm, unless that really doesn't count as an NBK chapter. Owo;;

And in RDS... The fight in the Cock's Walk, of all places! XD rofl I'd love to read those again. X3 So, yeah, I think it would be a good idea, though the final decision is ultimately up to you, Draco-san. =3 *hugs and waits for the next chapter*
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. chapter 6 made me crack up multiple times.
"“Because swinging your sword with your eyes closed isn’t the smartest thing to do. Eh, Zaraki?” Shunsui muttered under his breath, cutting his gaze at the taller captain across from him.
Zaraki snorted. “Seemed ta work awful well for those bastards Ichimaru and Tousen.”
Best dialogue I've read on this site. And the part with the 'justice, justice, justice" and the celine dion.... oh my god. you are my hero.
person Ranna
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shigure, huh? I like this premise.
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I'm not a fan of Aizen but I liked this fic, it kinda gives him more depth.

I think it would be a good idea to seperate the major side stories. There are a lot in the Never been kissed series and the Rukia's dating service ones, if you want to reread them it gets hard to go back and find them.
person Afrieal
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... that's a good idea for a motivation. it's a really interesting twist. thank you for that... it helps a little with a problem with Tosen. keep up the great work

affie and rysh
who are going plot bunny hunting now
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written!! You have an amazing sense of rhythm that makes reading your stories almost like reading poetry. I especially love this one. Just how you bring to light the cause-and-effect of betrayal... X3 you're so cool.
And to answer your question, I think you should just leave everything as it is. I think it's just the people who aren't reading your notes that are getting confused about story lines. I like how they are all in one place.
Anyways, lovely as always! ^^ keep up the amazing work!!!
~Darkness
person Yakumo
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter..and I think you should post those mini-story things separately. It makes it easier to keep track of them all that way.
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
# 79 i would LOVE to see a sequel to this one!! i can just see it!!

anyways! great chappie!

laters! ~_^
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD HAHAHHAHA awwwwww, I love it!!! How cuuuuute!!! I would LOVE to read the follow up of what's to come!! =^-^=
person Kuromei
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
roflmao XDDD "Then he smiled. Deviously." lmao XDD That's what I love about you. As much as I love the angsty things you write, I absolutely adore the comedic bits. lol X3 *hugs*

Tick. Tock. Tickety tock. X3