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for Seireitei Monogatari

by Crya2Evans

schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Speachless* There are just no words to describe this, it's just...wow.
I love it, I love the idea behind it. We all have neat little boxes somewhere, some of us have filing cabinets but the way you wrote it is just...wow!
person Yakumo
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice job with this one. I like a good serious story every now and then. ^_^
person person
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the chapter worst fears was amazing
person Ranna
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Byakuya is so screwed up sometimes. I love him, but the whole Hisana thing...it just reminds me of Vincent/Lucrecia. Because it is ALL her fault, no matter what anyone says.
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved this one!! Very sweet and sad. I just adored the line about how Byakuya wasn't "grieving for the love he had lost but the love he had never been given". That was a truly beautiful line. Or, as my writing teacher would say: "It is a Gem!"
person Yakumo
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was so cute! ^_^ I love Ichigo and Byakuya.. -hugs them both-
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Almost made me cry and that's not an easy thing to do. It was so sweet and so beautifully written. I loved where he pointed out that it wasn't Byakuya's fault that he was socially retarded, that was just brill. I love this series within a series, and I can't wait for the one from Byakuya's POV.
person Kuromei
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww~ Ichigo really is that kind of guy, isn't he? And Byakuya really is trying, even in the canon series. I think. I'm not exactly up to speed with the story. ^_^;;

Either way, I'm looking forward to the one with Byakuya's POV. ^w^ *thumbs-up*
person Emyrei
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Joy!
Shinji is fonneh!
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tattoos! *coughs*