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for Seireitei Monogatari

by Crya2Evans

schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha...ahh, good to see even the nice ones snap after a while. Very funny and cute. Can't wait for the sequel! Keep up the great work!
person Kuromei
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmfao Ukitake on the rampage! XD Oh god, I LOVED IT!!!! roflmao XDDD I guess we all have our breaking points, don't we? X3 Of course Zaraki's a great dad, and yes Komamura is hardly noticed (which is a shame.) lol "No wonder Sousuke left." X3 Long story short, I loved drabble #58 and I'm looking forward to part two of Mad Season. ^w^ *thumbs-up*

Have I told you how much I love you, lately? 'Cuz I do~ *heart*
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WaaaaH! (T______T) I was really looking forward to ukitake/ichigo pair! (T____T)
person Nasa
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o____o and here I was, thinking that no matter WHAT he does, Jyuushiro is far too cute to be any sort of threatening. OH WHAT A FOOL I AM. *cowers Gin-style behind Komamura* Don't let it get me!!
person Anon
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the fact that you were putting Ukitake & Ichigo together. It was a wonderful pairing. However, I must say I still can't stop laughing at this one. You REALLY out done yourself this time. OMG this was FABULOUS!!!!!! I only wish Renji had beaten Momo. I doesn't matter my wishes, this story is AWESOME. Please update as sson as you can! :)
person chibizoe
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*still laughing* I love reading these but this latest chapter takes the cake - well done!
person Baroqueangel
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Give me a minute to stop laughing...genius, pure genius. I bow, seriously, to your wonderful work. There is just no way to describe this, it was just a pure joy to read. You got all the home truths spot on and I loved that he was nice to Ken-chan.

'Ukitake rounded on Iba, the seventh division vice-captain feeling a bit like a soul in the eyes of a hungry Hollow. “Lose the sunglasses. You're not a gangster,” he declared. “You still live with your mother!”' I read this and had to stop for a few minutes while the hysterics subsided and I could wipe away the tears. I really liked his advice to Nemu too - one word, Patricide - perfect.

I can't wait for the sequel to this, the aftermath of Ukitake's rage, that should be fun. >_< Keep up the excellent work.
person silverblaise
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the ones that just really make me laugh, so having two in a row - yay! XD This one proves that every once in a while even the nicest, most mild-mannered people really need to snap and let it all out. :p And wow, he definitely did! Really looking forward to the sequel now! He does make a lot of good points though . . . *g* With Chad and Komamura, there's not much you can say about them that's bad really. Chad's kind of the quiet dependable one and Komamura - the shedding? But yes, they are just /there/, most of the time, not really standing out. So will there be a Rukia's dating service - Kenpachi in the future? :p Speaking of Ukitake, did you see the omake at the end of episode 162? Absolutely hilarious, and I'd love to see a ficlet of someone finding him. Not sure who, maybe Shuuhei? ^__^

I also laughed out loud at the last one, which was so cute (in a - disturbing - sort of way . . .) aw poor Ichigo. :p Or maybe not. I'm sure Gin could convince him it wouldn't be too bad, heheh.

I do like to try and give long reviews, and try to not just keep saying the same thing. And of course sometimes I'm just too lazy or busy to do a review. :p I know you probably don't need more ficlet requests/ideas, but I wouldn't mind seeing more of Shuuhei too. *g* I like the idea of Shuuhei/Orihime (I keep thinking of the episode in the Bount arc, where Orihime heals Rukia when Shuuhei wants to kill her since she's been possessed, and Orihime did stay in Soul Society for a bit.) Or Shuuhei/Ishida (one likes sewing, the other can knit . . .) I mentioned I like the more unusual pairings too, right? :p

But had a look at the website again and looking forward to the stories that are coming too, whatever you write. ^__^
person Ranna
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Finally someone says it! I wish he'd said something to Yamamoto, though. *gives Yamamoto a glare of unmitigated hatred*
person Nasa
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*laughing hysterically* oh god it hurts to breathe! Funniest. Stuff. EVER.