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by Crya2Evans

person Gilgrissom
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is the best drabbles I've read for Bleach, hilarious, dark, sweet, and romantic. I can't believe I'm saying this but....I think Byakuya is...a whore....Going after all those boys...Hehehehe...WHy can't Ichigo just make Byakuya his pet....Naked, wearing only a collar and his tongue hanging out slightly....J/k.
person Anonymous
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD I love this! Especially chapter 6, I could read that over and over and never get tired of it! Maybe, for the next dating service, you could have it with Hanatarou? (Just going by the logic Rukia used to pick out Ikkaku, Madarame might have been the first shinigami in Soul Society that he met that he would later befriend, but Hanatarou was the first new (shinigami) friend.) ...Okay, so it's more my love for all rare pairings and the fact that there are only four stories with that particular pairing in them... Anyways, good job, so far!
person aniay
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gods nr 15 was funny ^______________^ Having bar-brawl or whatever it's called is exactly what I think Ikkaku would call fun, along with Kenpachi OC
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. This was too funny! I Surrender...The Big Players...LMAO! You rock!
person aniay
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This few drabbles are just gorgeous i was cryig from laughter, almost fell from my chair :D
first drabble was oh so sweet ^__^ and i like the idea of Rukia being into yaoi *_*
second one surprised me how in character Hitsugaya sounded
3 was obvious in one point but it was funny anyway (dies with image of farting byakuya befor my eyes)
4 well not my thing realy but it reads nice
5 yyym zaraki with Byakuya o___O this got me some goos bumps but it was nice
6 got me faling from chair, Hate Momo (Is there any "Kill Hinamori" club? I want to join) Aizen with Ichigo strange, but Aizen hiding behind Ichigo, just rotfl, probably the funniest one :)
7 I really like Ren/Ichi but in dthis drabble something was missing
8 gods, at this point i was crying from laughter, just hilarious ^____________^
9 ^______________^ another great idea, in this fanfic SS is definitely NOT boring place to live...
10 not my thing, Chad is just so non-yaoi for me
11 nice sweet and I like the idea of poor little byakuya needing someone to hug him *_*
12 you made yamamoto sound like human, old but with kinda twisted sense of humourand little masochitic (buing Toshirou Candyland O_o I would be scared) Yachiru growing up, Kisuke's and Yorouichi's kids (that's scarry) and Isshin being grandson of Yamamoto O____O interesting Idea, it would explain a lot of things...
13 Kenpachi with jewlery O_______________O this would be scary but I like the idea of puzzled Kenpachi
14 Little similar to nr 11 but it's nice, nice and sooo sweet ^_^
Hope there is more to come
person microsoftword
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my first review on aff.net! i thought this was worth it

i didnt think the portrayal was off at all. but then i also adore this pairing and there is a huge lack of zaraki/byakuya stories..

i love how you write and this was wicked awesome! please write more!
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this the seconed time i read the big player and it's still the funniest shit i have ever read you should put a disclaimer saying not drink anything while reading this it that fuckin funny
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this was really fun the i liked was the farting story that was some funny shit and i'm still laughing about that but they all some good some fun ass story i'm kind of hoping that you would continue the one-shots there really are good
person gogochan
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
#9 is my fave. Totally. Awesome. Love it.
person gogochan
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wait a minute... I said that 9 was my fave, but that was before I read 11. OOOOh. So awesome. This is my fave pairing. Just started posting my Bya-Ren fics here. Mmmm, those two are so so so so so hot.