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for Topping On the Cake

by debbiechan

person moodymel
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah, I really liked this story. It was funny as well as lemony. Good job.
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Being a yaoi fan I've never read much of this pairing, but this story is changing my mind. They really are a cute couple, and the whole struggle for the top was really cool. I think you did a very good job of keeping them in character, as well as the Bleach-like humor. Thank you. ^_^
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww how cute!! I really loved this one....the first fic I read with this pair and has to be well written. Great job!!! I'd love to see more fics with pair as well!
person KFegari
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This might be my favorite pairing. I think you did Ishida's characterization really well and Orihime really is too cute!
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought having a lower centre of gravity made it easier to balance.
person Tennak
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute, wonderful and with a fantastic respect for the characters.
I really like your story! I love it when someone writes Orihime
as a very intelligent girl, and your version is that! You have
written her to be a caring, understanding and extremely sexy young
woman who makes sure that her man feels good! A very satisfying read!
Thanks for sharing!