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for Is that a Bow?

by CryptJo

person Aresy
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The bow! lol That was intersting. :P
person Hestia
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute! A nice little lemon!

Thanks for posting this!!
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was insanely funny and hot at the same time. Love the blushing Ichigo and Renji was just. . .amazing. ^^
person ashpik1
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, good stuff. He tries so hard, too bad Ichigo's in denial.
person Tennak
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Extremely funny! I love then so mush in your version.
Please give us more of these short and funny stories!
You seem to have great ideas to make us enjoy and laugh!
Very delicious and Renji needs some lovin' too!
Thanks so much for sharing!
person Pee-reviver
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Funny xD I loved the fellatio, rawrrr!
You should make a sequel!
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chokes on her laughter* A sure fire way to get Ichigo flustered is to talk about sex or be naked around him. If his enemies only knew that weakness he would have been dead long ago. I loved this! The bow almost had me dying with laughter. I had to hold it in since I'm reading this at a coffee lounge. I thought you were talking about a bow (makes no sense but how else can I describe it?) because that type of bow came to mind since Ishida does have one and I was thinking 'what is Renji doing with a bow?'. That is a much better bow for him to have! No actually sex but having a shy, blushing Ichigo is almost better. He can be so adorable sometimes XD!