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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such an amazing story. There are so many emotions tangled up all together that it's impossible not to be dragged in and pulled under by them. Thank you so much for posting this, and for writing it in the first place. <3
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. just.... wow. I really loved it.... (it made me cry... T_T) great story! each character was shown clearly and mature; I liked how Hisagi (wee! fav.! XD) struggled with the impact of Renji's words... i hope you write more SHuuhei, Renji, and Kira soon. though sad, I loved the ending- having Kira shoot him (is that right?) seemed like a powerful end. ^^;;
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First comment ever ('Noob' here) goes to my favorite story ever.
Usually when I finish a really good story, my comment is " Da-yuum thats hawt!" or " I thought I was gonna die laughing!" Maybe even " ouch, that sucks."
This one;
*Stares blankly* " ........" Possibly the only time I have ever come across a compelte lack of words.
..and I stil cant find any.
I almost feel guilty saying it was 'hot' but then the whole story was hot. Mainly Renjis difiance and general awesomeness, not just the N/C scene. THAT is an achievement.
I just saw that you also wrote my other favorite Bleach fic " Highly unlikley" You are so very awesome. XD
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the idea of the sidelong look. and i love how much renji impressed upon shuuhei the importance of standing up for what one believes in, no matter what. and the way it's written, amazingly well done, as should be expected of you both. constantly you two surprise me with what you can create. you both write so well, your prose and character control is amazing. i love both characters and am pleasantly surprised to see how well their characters transferred to this story. you both impress me. i'm awed by your story-telling abilities and i am floored by the flow of emotions in your story. great job with this. amazing job. 10/5
love to you both!
~hanyou-elf
love to you both!
~hanyou-elf
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was BEAUTIFUL!! I was crying a little at the end. [applauds]