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for What The Eyes Can't See

by Platinumsabr

person Nephthys
schedule March 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

great story

schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
an excellent story to say the least, and I look forward to its sequal, whats its title? I really wanna read e next story and see how things go for there kids.
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You're an artist. Never give up on writing.
person s.h.e
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhh...done at last...maybe i'll be able to concentrate on school now lol.....or maybe i'll just read the sequel....lol
great job, man. karin and Uliquorra...thats hilarious, yet somehow fitting.
person Savvy
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dude...that poem.....frickin rocked. loved it man. too simple yet so complex, awesome job summarizing his life....though i must say...hanatarou and Nemu??? that was a surprise, but as i ponder the thought of it....they fit quite well.
keep it up lol
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Bro,

@Chapter 6.

I promised I would start reading and I have. I love how you have been able to write a pairing like this and keep them in character at the same time. Poor Kisuke should learn to keep his trap shut or maybe give out critical information when needed. I also like how Tatsuki was training herself to be a shinigami without knowing it. The whole fight in the gym with the hollow and Ichigo using Cero was great. I can't wait to read more.

Moving on to Chapter 7 and Happy Writing.
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! I'm starting on the second one but wanted to review this one first. I love the coupling, it's different. I was wondering, with all the couples you've mentioned but never when in detail with, could you write little side stories about them? I LOVE the Tou/Ran pairing and thought you could write a really good story with them. And of course Hanatoru (Luv him :>) Please consider it! (Sorry for any spelling mistakes)
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a WONDERFUL story to read! I enjoyed every single chapter to the point where I HAD to make an account her to review this story! Now I'm off to read the sequel qhich I am so freakin excited to get started!
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An amazing story and a great read. I was pleasantly surprised to see an Ichigo/Tatsuki story here at AFF, I think Tatsuki is such a great character and it's disappointing to see that she simply fades into the background in the Bleach manga.
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this chapter just touched me. I need to stop reading stories that make me cry seriously I had tears when I read what he said to his mom and when Tatsuki came to him the eve of his mother's anniversary oh the tears! Im such a sap. I made an account on this site specifically to review this story! I usally wait until I've read the entire story to review but I couldn't wait I just HAD to review this chapter!