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for What The Eyes Can't See

by Platinumsabr

schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Best story EVER! great story even without the sex scenes XD.
Congrats on finishing it cant wait for your next story.
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know I'm late in reviewing this one Sweetie - but hot damn! Wonderful job My Brat, I'm very proud of you *which is an understatement*. Keep in touch with me via email when you're away, I promise to do the same.
Honestly though - this is by far your best work (and I've only missed one of yours 'cause you won't share it with me *pout*). Seriously though, Wonderful Job! You made a new pairing for me that I just love, and you turned me onto Bleach - for that I am eternally grateful.
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I can't believe it's over! After all this time, I feel like this story's become so much of a part of me - it's so sad that it's finished! I can't even imagine how you feel, being the creator of this absolutely wonderful adventure. The wedding was so sweet. I loved how you incorporated so many of the characters into it. Gosh, there are so many things I could comment on, but then this review would be REALLY long. I loved every time Hiyori showed up, though. The epilogue was a fitting end...Karin and Ulquiorra? Now that is a story I'd love to see...would you consider doing a follow-up to that, even if it's just a oneshot? What about Ichigo and Tatsuki's son and Urahara and Yoruichi's daughter? That would be amazing. I've loved reading this - it's definitely one of the best I've ever read!
person MrStrife
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah! It's over, and I dunno whether to laugh because I loved it so, or cry because it's come to an end! X3 My only regret, I believe, is the severe lack of Kenpachi... unless I just plain missed it, in which case, boo me!

I've had lots of fun reading this, and I just cannot wait to see what else you kindly give us. :3
person eva24
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations!!! What an accomplishment, you should be so proud XD I know I am. To have watched the progress of such a great writer is a great thing. Still Karin/Uliquiorra? Why do your crack!ships make so much sense?!! because you love the characters so much of course XD I've really enjoyed your work and look forward to your next piece.
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is done.

I don't know if I should laugh or cry at that. This had been great and I will certainly miss your updates. And incredible story, you have reason to be proud. Let us know when you start the next one!!!
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
near the end of the first chapter, describing uryuu's power. "his ability to be able to " that is repetetive. perhaps you could just make it "his ability to make other people's spirit particles ..." . concrit. nice story, nice writing. descriptive, just a tad flowery. however, im not one to talk...ugh.
person eva24
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Nell Is hot, I wish I had a body that toned :P So, just ignore it for this story and Bam!! key role in your next story (Yay!! Nellcentric, who shall she be paired with? ooo the possibilities)
Aside from that, great story, the fun never stops, Vaizard love XD Keep it up
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still love this. Thank you!!!
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* Yay, the Vizards showed up! You made a lot of good points with the conversation between Ichigo and Hiyori about hatred and prejudice. Props to you! I really hope that when the Shinigami go to war with Hueco Mundo, the Vizards join them. It would be amazingly kick-ass.

The wedding's almost here! I'm so excited!