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for What The Eyes Can't See

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person eva24
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! I'm so sorry *sob* I mean, I know I've moved to a new country and all so I'm not that guilty, it's just that I really did want to review and more importantly read the updates but it is hard to get AFF without your own connection. I mean I couldn't exactly access it in an internet cafe, for one think it would be blocked as porn and another I do need peace to read it.
aside from that (after reading three chapters in a sitting woo marathon!!!) I really need a cold shower. Yo! It's better than smut, it's emotional erotica!! (REeeeally need a cold shower right now) and at the same time there's lots of humour, action, characterisation, Yaaaay fun for all family!!! (sort of) XD
Keep going, we are all behind you. Remember, Bleach het is tragically underrepresentated in the fandom and ichitatsu even more so ^__^ They need your support
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah...buahaha, my bad. Sometimes when I read, I read so fast I tend to skip over things.

YES!!! More whoop-ass from Tatsuki...pardon my french! Ah, if I were better at sketching, I would totally draw the first and second forms of her shikai.

Thank goodness Ichigo didn't die! I knew he wouldn't, but it's still nice to know.
person MrStrife
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Applauds* I've missed reading this so much... internet's been a pain, y'see. XP But it's back now, and just in time for me to start reading again! Hehe... I liked the 'death' scene, pretty neat there. Seeing Tatsuki really fight was some fun, if y'ask me. X3 Can't wait for more!
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@ chapter 19 - Good going. Don't worry about not knowing how her parents act or don't act. The fact that they haven't even been brought into the show or (I'm assuming) Manga means you have some leeway. As always I loved it.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@ chapter 20 - Oooooo - you little snot!!!! You made me cry a bit - I should hurt you for that - but I won't *blows kiss*. Wonderful job on the last chapter - now that grad's out of the way - onto the wedding!
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One word, only one: WOW.

Said in an awed, hushed whisper.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh, I loved Tatsuki's parents' reaction. I kind of thought that with a daughter like her, her parents would despair of her ever getting married. So cute! I can't wait for the wedding!

Speaking of which...I honestly don't think JUST all of the 13 division is going to show up, right? Perhaps some members of the 11th and the 6th...? Gosh, what would Zaraki do at a wedding? *imagines him challenging wedding guests to fights* Eep.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was surprisingly... easy. Well they deserve it. Oh, love, can't wait for the chaos that is certain to ensue at the rehearsal. Won't that large an amount of spirit power bring in a lot of hollows??? Anyway, still love this, can't wait for the next installment. Thank you!
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!! Er ... WOW!!!!! Um... I can't type... Why do you ask? Because that was one of the BEST CHAPTERS YET! I don't care that it took you two weeks Brat (and it better not take you that long next time lol) it was well worth the wait. Now if you'll excuse me - your Peach has something she has to go do *chuckle*.
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh hotness and happiness!!! Thank you, as always a joy to read!