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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for a long-awaited fight scene! I'm too bloodthirsty for my own good, I know, but it's just so much fun to read a well-thought out and well-written fight scene. It was worth the wait!
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think this was too OOC for Ichigo. I've been wondering if and when he would find peace. You gave it to him in this chapter. Once again I loved the update, Brat! Your Peach signing off for the time being.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was an excellent, deep chapter! But... T_T Really tugged at the heartstrings, yeah? Still, can't wait for more.
Also... >.> yeah, you're pretty much the reason I had Ichigo jump out of that closet. Glad to know you're not mad about it, y'know?
Also... >.> yeah, you're pretty much the reason I had Ichigo jump out of that closet. Glad to know you're not mad about it, y'know?
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Angst!!! XD That's ridiculous now, Look how happy I am at Ichigo's annually scheduled emo-ness. Schadenfreude ne? I should be utterly ashamed...............But I'm not and plus it was necessary to your plot. I think it's in the fanfic bible (right after the chapters on crack pairings and Tales from the house of the moon ;P) and it states........."Thou shalt not advance Ichigos character and show him to grow up (some more) without addressing the angsty issue of mothers death" I gotta say that I love Karin. She's such a great character. You really got her in IC. She is obviously not interested in guys despite what the fillers suggest although HitsuKarin has crack potential (I think she really is a lot like Tatsuki and her respect of Tatsuki is canon. She compliments her in abstentia for becoming sexier i.e. more womanly since she went to high school)Denial is definitely not in her make-up. Her tact prevents her from stating some things but I think the scene with her was dead-on. XD Yay! Have fun until the next update.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool is cool and there is no way around it...muahahaha (though I prefer SWEET!!! a la Ashton Kutcher from Dude, Where's My Car?). Hyperactive imaginations are awesome...and I do love fight scenes. My friends call me bloodthirsty, but hey, when you're a fencer you gotta love combat! That's why I love Bleach and well-written fight scenes - which are delivered in spades here, by the way!
Wow, what an emotional chapter! I felt myself tearing up several times. You write relationships beautifully - thank you for understanding the kind of dynamic that makes a good one! Sometimes people don't understand that they have to share the good and the bad, because that's what makes you closer. It's wonderful that Ichigo has gained closure and acceptance in regards to his mom's death, because it makes him grow so much more as a person. What a lovely chapter!
...I am SO ready for some smut! And fight scenes! ^__^
Wow, what an emotional chapter! I felt myself tearing up several times. You write relationships beautifully - thank you for understanding the kind of dynamic that makes a good one! Sometimes people don't understand that they have to share the good and the bad, because that's what makes you closer. It's wonderful that Ichigo has gained closure and acceptance in regards to his mom's death, because it makes him grow so much more as a person. What a lovely chapter!
...I am SO ready for some smut! And fight scenes! ^__^
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! I read the first 15 chapters in like 2 and a half hours straight! I don't usually like any pairings other than Ichigo/Rukia, but I have to say, I'm totally blown away. Excellent plot, character development, descriptive use of language... I'm very impressed, and that doesn't happen that often!
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to mention: that poem... awesome. Inventive, and it pretty much covers his entire life story. I really envy you for your skills and hope to see updates on this soon, as well as some of your other works, too!
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reading on of your stories is always worth my time. I happen to like your crack pairing - it makes a strange sort of sense to me. Oh and I have a small inkling as to what will happen next. I honestly can't wait. Your Peach is well pleased Brat.
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOL so much at your Grimm x Chizuru pairing - it's wonderful - be very proud of that idea!
I love the tender relationship you've given Nell and Ichigo and I know guys who have explained that a single dad with cute children in a park or something is a babe-magnet, so I think you are completely correct!
Great idea to let Ichigo become King after having defeated Aizen and I really like your description of Hueco Mundo!
It's so nice to provide a girlfriend for Chad - he deserves the best!
I will keep laughing at your Grimm x Chi pairing!
Your inventiveness is fantastic!
Thanks so much for sharing and for making a "complete" Bleach universe!
I love the tender relationship you've given Nell and Ichigo and I know guys who have explained that a single dad with cute children in a park or something is a babe-magnet, so I think you are completely correct!
Great idea to let Ichigo become King after having defeated Aizen and I really like your description of Hueco Mundo!
It's so nice to provide a girlfriend for Chad - he deserves the best!
I will keep laughing at your Grimm x Chi pairing!
Your inventiveness is fantastic!
Thanks so much for sharing and for making a "complete" Bleach universe!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it, loved it, loved it!!!!!!!!1 ^_________________^ that was so brillant. Grimmjow/Chizuru, just when I thought that the character[Chi] couldn't get any crackier XD And thank you for Chad. He's so sexy but he gets hardly any lovin' and I love the idea of pairing him with Halle Berry..........erm Halibel.