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for What The Eyes Can't See

by Platinumsabr

schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The Grimmjow/Chizuru pairing is pure genius! I could not stop cracking up...they're oddly perfect together. I love how Chad has some love now, as well...he deserves it! And poor, poor Ichigo, suffering the torments of the damned...hopefully he'll get respite soon...heh heh. Please update soon!
person MrStrife
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I wonder why I didn't see Ichigo's new title coming... hehe, fun! At least Grimmjow takes pride in the small victories, eh? X3 Can't wait for more!
person MrStrife
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay Grimmjow! *Throws confetti* I've been enthralled by this story for about a week now, and I can't wait for this to continue! The anticipation, it kills me! Nice poem, by the way. Well thought out.
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, just when I was wishing for some smut...yay. I love HitsuMatsu, so thanks for putting them in! And I enjoyed the Isane part. She really doesn't get enough notice, but then when you have a manga as character-rich as Bleach, it's understandable. Ichigo's poem was amazing! But OHHHHHHHH the cliffie!!! Please update soon!
person eva24
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*hyperventilates* Ye Gods. How on earth did you pack so much into a single chapter. I was seriously debating a cold shower break in the middle of that chapter. Ladies and Gentlemen please take notes, THIS is how real emotional erotica is done. and then you throw in poetry and drama and comedy and the best cliffhanger ever!!!! LOL Grimmjow XD and Nell!!! who in my humble opinion is the cutest thing in Bleach. I just have the urge to buy her lots and lots of ice-cream *heh*
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was well worth the wait. I wasn't pacing this time - I was nailed to my seat waiting to see what would happen next. Ah! Feel the love in the air would ya? Such a wonderful thought - almost everyone getting a little love. I saw nothing wrong with any of it.
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had to stop and pace around while reading this one just to get my laughter under control. Not only can you write a wonderful fight scene, and your love scenes are just as good, but you write humor exceedingly well. Well done Brat - you're Peach is very pleased.
person eva24
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There was a mistake..............I didn't even notice *sweatdrops* But then again, We use a completely different school system where I'm from.
And thwere is absolutely nothing I can say but bravo, I approve XD Grown up Hitsugaya Yesss!! (Never was a hinamori fan) Take as much time as you need with a chapter, this was definitely a bumper edition ^______^ 'Kay must return to the deathly hollows, I put it aside to read your update, now don't you feel loved : )
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That fight was AMAZING!!! You really have done your research and made it really authentic. I could picture every move in my head. I KNEW they were going to make him captain! I loved the little bit with Hitsugaya...Hitsu/Matsu is one of my favorite pairings. And poor Tatsuki...I probably would have fainted dead away from embarrassment during the tape showing.
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeay, an update!!! So cool! If it helps the Japanese system is similar to the French one and their school year starts in April.