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by Platinumsabr

schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, he has no idea. Thank you, this is still a huge amount of fun.
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ACK!!! I've been on vacation for the past few days, so I completely missed the updates, I'm sorry! I LOVED the previous chapter; it was great to see Tatsuki fighting, and I can't wait to see when she truly comes into her own. I laughed so hard during this chapter - poor, poor Ichigo! How terrifying for everyone in Seireitei! The things that the Shinigami Women's Association gets up to, my goodness!
person eva24
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another update *blink and you'll miss it,huh?* I'm so surprised that you updated so quickly but I think that I'm even more thrilled XD.
That was brillant, topuching and hi;larious at the same time. Ichigo-drama, drama, tatsuki where are you?? Vengence. while Tatsuki endures the horror of a slumber party. I can imagine the terror ..."Tatsuki-chan, can I do Your hair? Then we'll watch the sex tape that Nemu recorded ^________^ " That video file isn't going to disappear, is it? Ooo, Iknow, it'll be Mayuri's wedding present.Bu the would probably make a fortune by striking a deal with the women and distributing it as, OO, I dunno, "Strawberry flavoured passion" or something like that. "Evilevilevilevil" and regarding Matsumotos lover, Please don't forget about that, i would love to see what you plan to do with that. XD Great stuff, don't you ever stop, this much underappreciated couple needs your love, as do your reviewers and stalkees ;)
person Statica
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe i love the story, love the way you did the last chapter esp with the description of Ichigo's power. What i have noticed they haven't had some 'Alone Time' for a while, they must be a bit on edge? no? hahah

Also i have been reading this since you first started posting on it, just never registered to the site, but want ya to know i check daily to see if your story has been updated, so keep up the good work...there is alot of us that do read just dont post reviews, our bad i guess /hug
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful - and poor Ichigo... He doesn't know what he's opened himself up to does he? Well written once again Brat - lol... Just your Peach getting back at ya... Please - by all means continue - I can't wait to see what happens!
person ardane1
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, well if you didn't get the idea from the 'Souls' Databook, I've got a link to my Photobucket with the picture Kubo drew of Tatsuki the Shinigami. http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l166/ardane1/anime%20manga/databook-souls-021.jpg

Always found it interesting that she is there on the page dressed as a shinigami and not anyone else. Another wonderful chapter by the way. I have always wondered if there were any lasting effects from that incident as well..
person Tennak
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great and amazing! Over 100 pages - that's soo wonderful! Congrats!
I simply love the fact that with this (very long) chapter 13 we're back to explosive action.
You write an enraged Ichigo so well - I could almost feel his amount of riatsu, but you could have tortured him a little longer (I'm a tiny bit evil, smiles).
I would love him to have a conversation with Renji/Rukia about everything connected with love!
Can't wait to see a wedding planned by the horrible women!
Thanks for sharing your beautiful and exciting vision with us!
person eva24
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nay, fret not noble scribe, thy shame, it is most unnecessary. ^__^
The hints you dropped throughout the chapters cause your stalkees to fangirl and speculate endlessly over the end result of your labours. I did initially believe your agent to be Yoruichis loyal groupie Soi fon but nonetheless I for one am thrilled to see the use of the enigmatic Nemu. Her stoic dance of joy makes me think of Orihime, both of them are like excited and eager puppies XD
person ardane1
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Solid Ichi/Tatsu story. I would enjoy seeing some more from you.
Also, I was wondering if you got the idea for Shinigami Tatsuki from her picture in the 'Souls' Fanbook?
person eva24
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it. I know I've said it before but it really is a great skill to be able to switch styles so easily. You start with some angsty passion and end with some wonderful slapstick. ^___^ also, gotta love the teaser. Oooo, Now I'm all excited and guessing. Maybe the women hold the money and training hostage until they agree to let them plan a huge wedding XD Tatsuki would probably be abducted and given a membership, The Bleach Omake shows him that Yoruichi has a membership......