rate_review Reviews

I like this story very much. It went though more closely the torment that the actual character of Kuchiki Byakuya would go though. I was MMMAAAAADDDDD at him!!!! When he raped Renji. I was like WTF?! The hell man, you not see the problem and pain you made? Geesh. I'm glad he finally did come to realize his wrong doing on so many levels.

I am glad you included more the Ren/Bya in here. Many stories on focus exclusively on them and I am left wonder what's going on outside of them. Surely, they are not in a universe where it's only them. I really appreciate the other character involvement and different settings. A lot of past stories I've come across they were only in the mansion.

I like the more true to character your story was. I flew though all 32 chapters in probably what would add to about 10-15 hrs. Bit by bit, chapter by chapter, in the past 2 days. A very good Read!

Lastly, I was wondering if the art work had ever gotten finished? Well, off to the squeal!!!!

This was an incredible story. I hope you get back to writing the sequil since I so want to read more of your works. I love the Renji/Byakuya pairing. I will look forward to more I hope.

I Love this one!
It is not many fictons of Byakuya and Renji like this, and hardly anyone that takes in to let it be a bit more difficult before them to reach eachother!! :D I really love this fic, and will go to see if i can find more that you have made, hopefully finding more! and FINALLY a fic where renji and byakuya seems to switch at who tops
Thank you again for making this one, as i used two days to read through all the chapters. (yes it was THAT addicting!)
hope you`ll have a wonderfull day! -Alvyien

This is so well written that I'm not sure how to begin speaking about it. Your skill as a writer is undeniable, but this story illustrates so much more than that. Fanfiction is often harder than original fiction because there are previously developed complex characters that the writer is expected to imitate. Understanding a character well enough to write something from their point of view is a great challenge, but you've done it so well. You've captured not only their personality, but who they are on the deepest level. Your storyline was very clear and engaging, drawing the reader in, and I couldn't stop reading. Great job with this.

Such a beautiful ending to a story that had me captivated. Thank you sooo much for all the work you've put in and giving me something I much needed. A genuinely good Renji/Byakuya story. Keep up the good work and I look forward to whatever you post next!

I believe a good writer knows their own story...when it's lacking, when it's good and when it's finished. I happen to agree with you. Even though you could have gotten away with the previous chapter concluding this story, the last addition was beautiful and completed the story nicely. Ukitake is so caring and fatherly and it was an especially nice touch when you revealed that Byakuya and Renji still had times when they fought for dominance but found clever ways to settle the dispute. Nice. Thanks for adding more to finish!

Such an amazing story this is. I'm sad its coming to a close but glad to see the way the ending is shaping up. I can't wait for the finale and look forward to your next story!

AHHH!! I cant believe its almost over!!! But it has been a long and trying road for our couple and it looks like its going to be a happy ending so Im glad. I cant wait to read the epilogue

This is a great story! I can't stop reading even I have exam tomorrow Oo
Renji is almost exacly like I ever imagined him. And I like this deep descriptions of emotions.

I was thrilled when I saw 2 new chapters! And I dont mind having to wait a little longer for a lemon. I hope I didn't come across as critical about there not being a nice long one before, I was just adding a suggestion. As it stands this is a great story and I cant wait for the next installment.