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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it is a very nice prospect...
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice prospect and thanks for the update. been far too long :)
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was soooooooo happy to see a new chapter for this, and then I noticed it was TWO!!! Yay!!! Its been sooooo long! And the cliffhanger did suck. I wanna cry!!! But oh wells... Please dont make me wait too long for the next chappie. ^^
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...omfg. You can't leave off there.
For the love of all us poor readers, FINISH!
For the love of all us poor readers, FINISH!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. I read it all in a 24 hour span which I'm proud of myself for. I realize the current relationship and all the things they have to go through. It would be cool to see a lemon in the story though. I'm very confident in your writing skills. It certainly doesn't have to be the main characters. Nor do you even have to do it. I'm just voicing my wish. I love this story though and am adding it to my favorites list
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic and your other one:Secret Garden. Do you think that the next time you add to them you can send me an email with the web address to let me know? My email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaaargh, wish Byakuya make it right this time.
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I don’t know what to say! I was so excited to see a new update, and my, it was a brilliant read! I never know where to begin when I review… erm…
I really, really think you showed Byakuya’s thoughts and feelings in a wonderful way. I’m glad he’s finally managing to make some sense of all the things going on in his mind. I really wasn’t sure how he was going to react to Rukia’s visit and his consequent realisations; whether he would hide from it anymore, or whether bits of him might fall apart. I’m so glad he’s found this sort of peace where he can at least think straight. I get so worried about him… *blushes*
I love how you conveyed his now-clear thoughts, and the parts about Hisana put a tear in my eye. I really, really love how you’ve developed Byakuya over the whole fic, and how far he’s come from back in chapter one to this, where he understands things, accepts things, and even admits that he is wrong where he is (even if it took him a long time to realise).
He would be the person Renji could not resist and the person who could not resist Renji. I think this line was lovely at showing their feelings for eachother. I never really thought much of this pairing until I read this fic, and now I can’t get enough of it. I like the way they are sort of everything the other doesn’t need, and everything they do need at the same time.
The interaction between the pair at the fourth division, I thought was great. Renji’s defensiveness really shows how much the whole mess with Byakuya has gotten to him, and I’m glad Byakuya is noticing this very much now and opening up more. The ending of this chapter was just perfect! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
I really, really think you showed Byakuya’s thoughts and feelings in a wonderful way. I’m glad he’s finally managing to make some sense of all the things going on in his mind. I really wasn’t sure how he was going to react to Rukia’s visit and his consequent realisations; whether he would hide from it anymore, or whether bits of him might fall apart. I’m so glad he’s found this sort of peace where he can at least think straight. I get so worried about him… *blushes*
I love how you conveyed his now-clear thoughts, and the parts about Hisana put a tear in my eye. I really, really love how you’ve developed Byakuya over the whole fic, and how far he’s come from back in chapter one to this, where he understands things, accepts things, and even admits that he is wrong where he is (even if it took him a long time to realise).
He would be the person Renji could not resist and the person who could not resist Renji. I think this line was lovely at showing their feelings for eachother. I never really thought much of this pairing until I read this fic, and now I can’t get enough of it. I like the way they are sort of everything the other doesn’t need, and everything they do need at the same time.
The interaction between the pair at the fourth division, I thought was great. Renji’s defensiveness really shows how much the whole mess with Byakuya has gotten to him, and I’m glad Byakuya is noticing this very much now and opening up more. The ending of this chapter was just perfect! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just read all your chapters. I only found this today. It's an amazing story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Please let Byakuya change. Please. I want them together :)