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I just read the eighteen chapters over the last few days, and your writing is simply wonderful. You tell a great story in a great way, really. The development of the story, of the ever-wavering relationship, of their contact and conflict- it's just perfect. It seems very... real. The characterisation is spot on- the depth with which you don't just look, but SEE the characters is great- and the way you go about it with no rush, with the advancement and elaboration of the plot always seeming true to situation and character, is very admirable. This is one of the best fics I have read in a while. I'm utterly absorbed in it and simply can't wait to read more. I hope it's not too long before you get a chance to update.

I'm totally hooked on this story *__*

damn it! I just red this today and I'm dieing for an update! >.< hurry up and I won't kill you!!!! :P good story, very well written. Update soon :)

Very good, I love this! Poor Renji xp

So beautiful, so wonderful! I adore this story, it's one of my all-time favorites. There's such elegance in this story one hardly ever meets anywhere these days. Update as soon as you can!

I really liked this chapter - when Renji managed the Kidou I was so proud I was almost jumping up and donw on myc hair whilst clappinglool - had a very fangirlish moment especially with Byakuya's reaction to the restraining spell, it made me wanna smirk. The way Byakuya replied to Renji's success was so IC i loved it as well and how Renji reacted to it made me go all shivery. Can't wait to read how these two develop next. Thansk for the update! Gonna go and fave it on Y!Gal XD

Hina xXxx

The trap is tightening around both of them, how much longer can they resist?

A wonderful new chapter! I love your Byakuya! You keep him in character even though he's changing.
I'm eagerly waiting for a new update, as always. You have such great talent with writing.

YAY!!! You're back!!! And with a damn great chapter too :D starting at the beginning again are they? I'm glad Byakuya's trying even if he still feels uncomfortable and Renji at times he still seems wary - like with the training - he wasn't quite sure of Byakuya's intentions ^_^ it was another great chapter from you, thanks! Hope you ahd a good break ^_6

Hina xXxx

Welcome back. I am very interested in seeing where you take these two. The end seems inevitable, but the journey obscure, keep going!