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*sigh* well at least - Byakuya attempted to make amends... sort of umm well he didn't do it very well and I guess after what happened I wouldn't give a crap either if I was Renji... and then well, the kimono *shakes head* that didn't work out well did it? Then he banned Renji from going on the mission and the conflict has gotten worse lol, this fic is well named ^_6 great update as always and can't wait for the next one. Thanks ^_^

Hina xXxx

This would have to be one of the best stories that I have read about ByaRen! I am really enjoying it, the tension is palpable in its intensity and it reads very smoothly. I feel that you have written them out of character as there are no jarring parts of interaction. Discription is also well done, I can picture things clearly in my mind as it is happening on the page. The only problem I have is with the occasional spelling mistake. But like I said it is occasional, and doesn't detract dramatically from the story. Usually with such mistakes I can't continue to read as they are so jarring that they snap me out of that 'space' I was in whilst reading, but with yours, whilst I notice them, I'm too impatient to read the story to allow them to bother me! Well done, I look forward to reading more!

Oops! *sheepish grin* That should read 'have not written them out of character' sorry y'al! *Note to self - Read your own reviews before posting!* :-P

*twitchjerkflail* I love this story! I keep poking around to see if there's more, I adore it beyond reason :D You're doing such a good job of keeping everyone in character through it all, and you put just enough detail into things. <3 Have my babies lol

:s *sigh* I feel bad for renji - I mean, he ahs the right to feel that way and then Rukia's invitation just seemed to make him sort of panic. I liek the way you're portraying his relationship with Rukia (probably mentioned this already) and I think that Rukia's thought patterns seem very Ic too which is really cool ^_^ anyway lol, thanks for the update!!!

Hina xXxx

Deeper and deeper into the twisted corridors of the mirror house we go. Please, update again soon.

Gods poor poor Renji... I litterly had tears in my eyes... Damn it byakuya!
Very well written, and I can't wait to see more but... Damn it!

;o;~

First of all, when I read your reply to my comment, I felt so flatter xDDDDD Thanks!

I feel so bad for Renji in these last chapters... First he thinks he can melt Byakuya's iceness, then he is confronted with his roughness and even know he still clings on some hope that maybe there is more to Byakuya then he lets on. It's so confusing, and, when they acctually meet again, it's going to be so full of yelling xD

I like how you describe Renji's feelings, like to see how you can work with him even in the most horribles scenarios, I think I already said that, but doesn't matter 8DDD

See ya \o/

I didn't had an account here, and would'd sent you an e-mail, but after this last chapter I felt there I just had to write a review. I don't know, but sometimes reviews are better than e-mails o_õ

I just can't imagine how hard it must had been for you to write this.

After reading all the fic it's just obvious that you're, no matter what, trying to make it IC, trying not to make them suddenly jump in each other's arms, and to do something like you did in this chapter and still get it not to be OOC, it's simply amazing.

Amazing how you constructed the fiction, the characters, the background, the atmosphere, the scenes. It's just amazing. I've only encountered few people who had this kind of ability in fanfitions.

So, even if things keep going darker, know that you've done a great job with this fic.

Kisses and see you in the next review \o/

Ye gods you are evil. Soooo evil.