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whoa O_O intense. really intense. really hot O_O and really well written so kudo's to you ^_^ heh. But now I'm wondering if this is actually going to make things worse between them :s I mean - Renji's going to be pretty pissed off about it so... *sigh* but then i suppose things between two people like that will take a while to iron out, not to mention that byakuya still has the problem with actually thinking about Hisana. Anyway, as always great update :D thanks ^_6

Hina xXxx

Wow O_O intense, I'm feeling better now lol, didn't know it wasn't a binding spell since I'm not familiar with the kido so it was a relief that it wasn't more painfull and damaging lol. Byakuya *shakes head* well at least he's remembered that things had been different and I hope he can deal with it okay :s and Renji heh *smirks* taking Senbonzakura will prove an interesting thing to do I think, especially since you said somethin nice will happen next chp. - although it could be something completely different lol to what I'm thinking ^_^ but anyway. Thanks for the update it's great!!!

Hina xXxx

angst to the nth degree! wheeeeew. XP I wanna see them resolve this though! (meaning: I'm enjoying this, Good story!)

O_O oh. my. god.

ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmydgodohmygodohmygod O_O you left it there O_O... I can't believe... you left it there *cries* oh god and he apologized and it came to this *shakes head* well, I suppose it needed to be said and Renji sure has guts so I suppose only he could've said it. But that cliffhanger was cruel you should have mercy on us loool :D it was a good chapter though and I liked the scene with Byakuya and Senbonzakura, it was interesting and almost hauntilngly poetic if you see what I mean. Anyway lol I liked it ^_^ Thanks for the update

Hina xXxx

Such a lovely relationship you've given Byakura and Senbonzakura. I like the idea of their interaktion like you have described it. Great!
You have made the two guys into adult men and I love that too. "Way to go Renji - pour your passion into that cold Taicho!"
Love your cliff hanger ending!
Thanks so much for sharing

*squeal*
Now Renji has really done it! How will this end? o.o
Hurry hurry, write more! :D

What did you do????

Update, I NEED to know what's going on. Please.

First off I want to say that this has been a riveting story. I'm impressed with the your perspective and interpretation of Byakuya and Renji. Fiery passion and icy stoicism....wonderfully written.

This particular chapter gripped my heart. Incidentally I had iTunes on random and "You Run" by Submersed played while I was reading it. Oh.My.God....it made it even more powerful.

I could felt the weight Byakuya's loss and gritted my teeth along with Renji's frustration...5-stars...beautifully written emotion.

Oooh I didn't mind this chapter at all :D heh, it was great! Made me want to read the story of these two heh :d but yeah, Shinsui is perceptive ne? He's right as well because there's bound to be loads of problems with this relationship because of the characters of the people involved in it *sigh8 but yeah ^_^ cool update, thanks.


Hina xXxx

Ok while I do love Shunsui and Shuichiro together (they're so sweet and caring and you wrote them very, very well) I SO want to know what will happen neeeext! You totally got me hooked up to this, I can assure you!