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for Black-and-Red Conflict

by ghostraven

person Anon
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No Byakuya/Renji loving!? =O

Oh well, Jyuushiro x Shunsui is a pretty cute pairing ^^
So sweet, they're worrying about the other two ^^

Keep on writing ;D
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is incredibly GOOOOOOOOOOD!
I really hope there's more.
I'd VERY much love to read more.
Plz?
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, this is getting tense.
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't review your fic before now! I thought I did but I must have forgotten T_T
Byakuya/Renji is my absolute favourite pairing ;) You portray them so nicely and that sudden kiss; mmmmmm. Can't wait to see more of this fic!
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh I was so happy when I saw another update!!! I know people don't update every day lol but I chek just in case :D and as alwasy no dissappointment here ^_^. I liked the way you portrayed Renji and Rukia together, and poor Richiki lol he felt so guilty after it all - I felt bad for him lol when more and more people started arriving and he told them all *sigh*... but I guess he did bring it on himself a little ne? But the ending for the chapter was really sad :s, I'm wondering how they're going to get through this - Renji and Byakuya I mean, but I think you know you're doing a really good job it ^_6

thanks for the update

Hina xXxx
person Ginny
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter once more; I love how Rukia found Renji on her doorstap, it's so sweet... And it's amazing how well you've kept them in character, well done!
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Palpable tension. Relieve it soon, please. Or at least extend it.
person Ginny
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh... My... God... indeed! Wow... Just wow! O_O
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated!!! I've been checking everyday loool (a bit extrme I know lol) but yeahh :) like the first wto chapters it was amazingly intense and I loved it! And then Byakuya just seemed to snap and I was like O_O whoa, but then he left the office and Renji was in a state of sock - but the build up too that was fantastic too, I mean they're so angry and Byakuya clearly didn't know how to just diffusethe situation, I suppose his pride wouldn't have let him simpley apologise for letting things deteriorate like that 0 but then if he had done that lol we wouldn't have had the amazing turn out we did heh :D so yeah

Thanks for the update and you're writing is amazing
Hina xXxx
person Ginny
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh this is very good! |I like how you describe the characters and their reactions to their own feelings and to eachothers. It's pretty much how I see them, too. Poor Renji... Looking forwarth to another chapter!

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