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May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
8D Me likes this story! <3
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was just looking through old Bleach fics, I couldn't believe I hadn't read this before! Excellent job capturing their personalities, very sexy.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story *smile* and even more interesting myspace page... please keep writing in the bleach genre if you can
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice fic. very hot. I love the odd pairing of Ichigo/Kenpachi. Some of the sentences were too long. Maybe try to seperate them out a bit? And I felt the climax was kind of abrupt...as climaxes go -laughs- But all around I thought it was awesome!
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you really should do another chapter or a sequel. The last part was to funny with Ichigo screaming at his classmate to shut up. Most of the story was interesting but could use some filling out, but other than that it was really quite fun to read.
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was funny poor Ichigo his little bum is hurting hahaha you should make chappie no.2 jut a thought
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great pairing, but we found it to be a little dry, and it lacked character development and expression. I like the idea behind it, and I think with a bit of development, it could be very good. The formatting has a bit to be desired, and you can fix that by hiring yourself a BETA reader.
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