rate_review Reviews

Well, in my opinion, you did pretty good. HOwever, you're missing a lot of detail in the writing. You simply say "This happens", and "By the time". You mension that karin cums four times, but 'how' did she come? That's the real question, and that's what people want to read.

Bottom line; not enough work went into this story.

Loved it... Wish there was one of Ichigo and Yuzu and Karin... It would be interesting...