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for The Darkness Within

by NarakusKoi

person amethyst ichigo
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really loved, please continue your story soon!
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please Please write more... i really enjoyed reading this....really...please? Oh great one...more?
person Terrance
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I really like it do another one please. In fact why not a whole saga Naraku-s Dark Soul?
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow ummmm yeah that all i can say (good writing)
person Pho
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's dark and it's awesome. Very well written. Your details were good, without being too over detaily *yeah I don't think that's a word, oh well* and your grammer was very good, I didn't notice any of it while I was reading. I like the idea, how awesome is that that Rukia not only has to watch Ichigo get raped, but he's pressed up against her. You're twisted! And then her blood as lube. Nice touch. Very good, I hope to see some more work from you.