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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was really nice and the only thing you could have writen more of would be full blown lemon that would have been fun to read to.
Or make the story into a deeper story about relatioships and love and Ichigo's Father maybe blowing a gasket after learning his son's with Abarai Renji, taht would have been funny to read too.
But I like your story for being short and fun Renji really does have a short temper and so does Ichigo so this pairing is very hot blooded and passionate.
Or make the story into a deeper story about relatioships and love and Ichigo's Father maybe blowing a gasket after learning his son's with Abarai Renji, taht would have been funny to read too.
But I like your story for being short and fun Renji really does have a short temper and so does Ichigo so this pairing is very hot blooded and passionate.
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hah hah! I love the intro!!
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol cute but of course too too short for my liking. When you think of more please write! :P
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was cute and hot. Ha ha. Great job!