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for Necrophilia

by debbiechan

person Kashima
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I could almost hate you for that. But I don't, I honestly think you're a terrific writer, you have a real talent, only please don't ever do that again, I get horrible headaches when I cry.
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should know, your angst fiction is the only angst I read and enjoy consistently (as a genre, I usually don't enjoy it all that much, but you prove talent knows no genre). You should also know, that quite a few of your stories have made me cry...this was definetly one of them. The raw emotion of it was so geniune, which (I might have told you this in a review before) is what I think sets your angst apart from others...it feels geniune. Ooo, I like the way that sounded...your fiction 'feels'. And I'm not just talking about staying IC, (which you also do so very well), I mean that the emotion and actions presented make sense and 'feel' right to the reader (which is saying a super lot condsidering the theme here). We don't just understand the character, we feel with them, you guide us along their logical and emotional path so effortlessly. You make it seem so easy, when in fact it is extremely difficult. What a challenge you presented yourself with this one! My hats off to you for a resounding success; it's not easy to make necrophilia heart-warming. (BTW, I read each of your Ichi/Ishi at least three times and yet I so very rarely review...I'm sorry! I suck! I should probably rectify that...) Thanx for the fic, Citadel~ PS The title seems so harsh for such a beatiful and sad piece (considering how aptly named your other fics are), but I suppose you wanted to ensure that a strong warning was given to your readers as to pertain to the content, which certainly makes sense in this flame-ready world!
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for these kind reviews. Citadel--your review made me cry. I was so worried about this fic, to tell the truth. "Heart-warming necrophilia" makes me smile.
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was... different. Very well written and I liked how you didn't try to make it erotic, going instead for the feelings, the emotion.