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person morlea
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it was funny. I hope you'll continue:P
person Mimori
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot it's quite fun.
person i wish i were xena
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this side of Ichigo! So cute and unsure of himself- he is a 15 year old boy after all!! I really like the way you've written Renji as well! This was an awesome first chapter!!
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome first chap!
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was the most amazing thing i've read ALL week. You're so brilliant! I love your sense of humor!! Awesome AWESOME job with this fic and i hope you continue it!!!
person Touya06
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoy writings like these.

It doesn't have to have a complete story or story at all, just 'one-shots' or 'drabbles', if you prefer, about different things throughout a relationship.

Though I do like it when the 'drabbles' have more to them. So far they're good, but maybe add a little more to them in the future.

Like the second one, they don't have to be completely happy ones at least throughout it, even a two parter is okay.


Keep up the great work, looking forward to more.

-Touya06
person Aresy
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dont think you were occ with either of them. I enjoyed these chapters so far, good luck and keep writing more!!!
person Tennak
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi hi! I still like!
Please continue - we need something to smile about!
BTW I think your Renji is spot on.
Thanks for sharing!
person Tennak
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far! Maybe your Ichigo is a little ooc but as you yourself pointed out, people in love are sometimes acting strange! As I understand it you want to continue with this pairing and how they evolve? Please do! And I truly hope for 100 chapters of pure red & orange fun.
Good luck and thanks for sharing!
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Enjoy it! Please do write more.