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for Tales of the Chore Boy

by MrStrife

person kamiyoni
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok so you lied before... will you keep your word this time and try out my challenge?
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok i just have one question WHY IN THE BLUE HELL ARE THEY FILMING HANA FOR? and nice chapter
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for this one. You captured the personalities of the two third seats very well, although the lemon itself felt a bit rushed.
person Kuma
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good work, mate. Especially with finding a way to make Hanatarou such a...giggilo!!! Never would have expected that! Sucks that it's on hiatus, but please keep up with the good work!!!
person call me Klutzy Kitten
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, I think that we should see Hanatoru with Byakuaa... I know I didn't spell his name right but hey I'm only human and after reading your story who could blame me. Anyway I think that Rukia's older brother has a tender side just waiting to suface or maybe he has a severe S&M issue where he loves to control his partners. I think it would be an awesome coupling!
person kamiyoni
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
to B.A.Z.: awsome i hope for the goodness i've seen thus far in this story


to the reviewer above: i don't know if you been reading but.... so far all of the pairings have been STRAIGHT, and i think the author plans to keep it that way.
person kamiyoni
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is made of WIN. you style is just the kind i'm looking for, for my bleach challenge.
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Umm... -.-; Soi Fong is the second division captain, not the third... but other than that... GREAT CHAPTER!!! I love this pairing, it's awesome... you really should write more of it...
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! Hanataro gets to have a threesome with two hot women! This is easly my favorite so far.

So the two seats in the 13th Company are next huh? It's not going to include yaoi in it right? I'm not excatly a big fan of that (I'm not against it, but I don't read it)... but it's your fic so I can't say anything about it. I would usually stop reading a fic altogether if I see it, but since I'm enjoying your fic too much I'll just skip over it (if there IS yaoi in it of course).

Anyway, good chapter!
person bait you in
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's really one of the more interesting stories out there.