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for Tales of the Chore Boy

by MrStrife

person waterspear567
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder who could be next on the list.
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn she's crazy! Of course, we all knew that...

But seriously, she stuck two of her fingers in Hanataro's ass! That's not right! Crazy, crazy girl!

Though Rangiku is crazy too for giving Nemu the video camera.

Anyway, it's still a fun read. I'll be waiting for more!
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you are so naughty. I have an idea what about a threesome with the thirteenth division's Kiyone Kotetsu and Sentarō Kotsubaki? Can't you just see the two of them fighting about Hanatarou or who is better or liked better and things getting all raunchy?
person Havenoname
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Got to love sex in the hot springs! To me, the hot springs always make sex look hot (and no pun intended thank you very much)!

I'd say Momo was quite the lucky girl in this one. And oh man, Rangiku is going to make one hell of a porno film!

Now Nemu and Yoruichi are next? Those I HAVE to see!

As for the ideas, I'll say after these next two girls then Captain Unohana should be next. Nothing says 'kinky' than fucking your captain! Maybe Nanao after that as well. I'm also willing to bet you are going to save Rangiku for last, right?

Well, I'm going to stick around for the next chapters! Go Hanataro!!
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soi Fong! Ah, Soi Fong-sama does not get enough love... and ninjas must have interesting forms of bondage... hmmm... another crack pairing for me to write...
person Meinos
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! way to go, hana! Please, next chapter?
person Havenoname
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright, Hanataro!!

He really needs some more love from the Bleach girls and this fic of yours was just what he needed!

And how sneaky of Rangiku to video tape him and Rukia together, but than again, Hanataro will get more action when Rangiku shows the tape to the other women.

That is if you plan to continue this fic.

Anyway, great lemon!! You rock!!