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for One is Too Many

by TrulyWished

schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Kira is going to behave now that he's realized he love Ikkaku. He wouldn't start putting distance between them would he? And I suposse Ikka's not going to confess his feelings anytime soon. Hm, maybe Yumi could help out (and ruin things completely, you never know with him).
person BeniHime
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH NO! How can they both be this stupid?! The are so in love with each other!
*sigh*
Maybe they come to there mind in the next chapter. Keep going. Hope to read from you soon. ^^
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, flowers... how sweet. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Afrieal
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh goddess i just stumbled across your story. It's truely powerful and wonderful. Af is still trying to formulate words we went thru a box of tissues reading it all tonight. Please update when you can.
Hey Cool story Rysh is right you are a wonderful writer. *sniffle* good luck with your move.

Rysh and Affie
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Words fail me at the moment. Keep up the good work and good luck with moving! ^_^

A+!
person Lavinia
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaw, that was so cute
I'm astonished of how you flip from one emotion to the complete opposite, at first, it was bizarre, but now that I have grown used to it, I really like it. Gives your fic an unique pattern.
I hope that there will be more soon :D
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*punches you in the arm*

I can't even finish my story for checking updates on yours. This is not good for business, not at all. I must ban myself from this story. I'm afraid for Monday when I have to go back to work. I'll be checking this site all day and will probably get fired. That was an extremely well written lemon, it kept with the angst (Kira making sure he was 'clean' killed me) and was extremely romantic as well (Ikkaku washing him). You and Tite Kubo have ruined my life!!! Lol...don't pay me any attention. Please continue, lest I carve 'IG' on my eyelid as a vain attempt to be a part of this story.
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, that was fun to read. Poor Kira, I didn't think he'd be jealous of Yumi. But where the hell is Ikkaku going?
person BeniHime
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my godness! Kira is a genius!To ask Yachiru for help! Pore others. Kira was really great in this chapter and Yumi also. He can be so kind. ^^ I loved this chapter. It was fun to read. Keep going. Hope to read from you soon.
person BeniHime
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wuhu! Kira has a temper. XD
This was brilliant to blow him out of his room! XD
The thing with the flowers was so KAWAI! After I read this I truly wished, that I had someone carring this much for me, as Ikkaku does for Kira. Keep going. Hope to read from you soon.