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for One is Too Many

by TrulyWished

schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good gods i almost cried when Yumi said they went to the mortal world to get those flowers. I'm still a little teary-eyed. Ikkaku is such an idiot! How did he forget the one promise he made to Kira? But it was so great to see Kira angry. I hope he gets back to that soon.
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kira is more of an ass than I thought. Oh well, he is a man after all. I love this. 2 chapters in one day...it must be Crimmus! Lol...good luck with the moving. Don't hurt your hands or arms or anything that will prevent you from writing another chapter. ^-^
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... hot AND sweet. Way to go. This is, by far, my favorite chapter yet *LOL* Can't wait to read more ^-^
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So this is going to be my favorite chapter, if only for the pouting Kira at the end. But I can't think of where the fic will go now. Guess i'll just have to sit back and be surprised.
person BeniHime
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*droll*

~ one hour later ~

*still drolling*
What a lemon...
*starts again*
*to absorbed to leave a good comment*
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm, well, this was... what's it called again... oh, right!

BLOODY AWESOME! Kira! Ikkaku! ZOMG!

*dies*
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An update! W00t!

Can't wait to see the next chapter and I'm looking forward to finding out what happened to the former vice captain/lieutenant/fukutaicho!
person silverblaise
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaagh! Please continue with this soon! I hate getting into a good fic and then realising it's not finished. ^^; This story is so - ugh I don't know . . . It's almost made me feel like crying, and feel disgusted - but not in a bad way - I suppose it's also because I really hate abuse in all forms, but it's good, that you can bring out such emotions in people with a story. :-) I don't know these characters, I haven't watched that far in Bleach yet (I looked them up on Google just to get an idea of who they were) but the story sounded good and I'm enjoying it so far! So please keep it up! :-D
person Khelsea
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. But your grammar needs a little work. It can make the reading awkard at times.

Other than that, the plot so far is very piqueing. And I love the couple. Its my first one for these two and I adore it.

Much thanks! Keep up the good work!!
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
15 chapters? Yay! Loving this so far, and I can't wait to see more. (Love Kira's jewlery, buy the way. I've always been a sucker for peircings *LOL*)