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Wow. Just wow. I'm really impressed with the way you are characterizing Ikkaku. He's so gentle and clueless, unable to help Kira. He wants to reach out and touch him without Kira shying away from him, but I don't see it happening in the near future.

What really got me was Kira asking Ikkaku to not go to his rooms and Ikkaku accepting it so gently. I really like the way this is going. I really hope that smut doesn't cheapen this fic, if you understand what I mean. It's really very beautiful. I can't wait for the time that Ikkaku touches Kira and Kira doesn't shy away from him or shiver in fear.

God, Gin's such a bastard. I love how you've given him personality without even including him in the story. Beautiful job! Bravo!

post. faster. oh my god.

Woah! At the begining of your story I had to force myself to read it. But it was worse the truble I put myself in. It was again amazing. And oh so sweet how Kira reacted to Ikkaku kissing him. *happy sigh*
But who is Tatsuyama? oO Well I am sure you let us find out in the next chapter. ^^ Hope to read from you soon. ^^

Hm, I'd like to think Ikkaku is making progress here but I'm not sure. I wonder what he'll do when he learns about Kanvis? I keep thinking that once he figures out all the things Gin did that he should report it to Yama-jii (first division captain). But I'll just have to wait to see what happens, ne?

His head jerks around and he stares at me, horrified. Well, if I'd been caught trying to steal someone else's man, I'd be horrified too.


You are hardcore. You make my life right now. This makes my heart race. And nothing but Batman and fried chicken make my heart race. Want some cheesecake? Lol. Please continue. Kira says he's anxious to be kissed again and Ikkaku is tired of palming off. The three of us want the next chapter. :)

PLEASE ADD MORE SOON!! I love this story and it pulls at my heart strings!! Poor Kira! You have written him perfectly and Ikkaku! WOW!! You did so well with him too!!
Keep up the wonderful work!!

Wow, I didn't think Kira would ever act this submissive. I can't wait to see what Ikkaku does to the three brats who started this. It's time he put his years in the Eleventh to good use. Thanks for the extra chapter. Dying to read the next one though.

poor kira. I feel so sorry for him. the new recriurts are a pain in the ass. but i bet know that ikkaku knows their names, hell will break lose. Go Ikkaku! Punish them for making fun of kira! Hope to read from you soon. ^^

Bless you and your attention seeking! I stumbled across this story yesterday and hadn't expected any kind of update soon but hope dies last, right?

The way you write Kira differs very much from the image of him I have in my head but my view of him and Ichimaru are a little askew so it doesn't matter XD. It's a very nice story! Looking forward to the next chapter!

This story is awesome. Poor Kira. What has he endured? Will Ikkaku be able to bring Kira into brighter days filled with true smiles? Will Kira stop being the perfect obedient slave? or Will he continue to fear Ikkaku's rath if he is not perfectly obedient?

I wonder . . .

Please update soon!