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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please make Ikkaku fuck up those brats that hurt Kira's feelings. And when do they start making sexy time? I'm impatient...don't make me act like Yachiru. Love ya!
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Oh but I almost cried so many times. Poor Kira! Damn Gin to hell! And just what did he do to the rest of the third division? What couldn't Kira protect them from? And what will Ikkaku do when he finds out?
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah! the ice is melting! it was as always a pleasure to read your story. ^^ please continue as soon as you can.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Deep breathes, Kira. You can do this, you're not a child anymore. There is no need for Tetsummi to carry you here. But it would be so great if he were here, big hands on my shoulders to push me forward. The last steps are always the hardest, that final chance to flee the most difficult to give up.
Hadarame already "
breaths/Madarame and perhaps it would look better with hyphens than commas?
s' not criticisms just suggestions! I liked the fic!
Hadarame already "
breaths/Madarame and perhaps it would look better with hyphens than commas?
s' not criticisms just suggestions! I liked the fic!
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kira is so frightened...poor thing. Keep going. I'm enjoying myself and want to see Kira's prize.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you would never ever do this right? Let Ikkaku beat the answers out of sweet little Kira.
Again I can only say I feel sorry for Kira. But not for the squad. When Ikkaku is finished with them, then there will be another decent fighting squad and Kira will probably be a man. By any means. XD
the way you let Ikkaku act is so much like him. You see who has trained him. And he is giving it to his squad. Please continue. I can't wait until the next chapter is up.
Greetings
Beni
Again I can only say I feel sorry for Kira. But not for the squad. When Ikkaku is finished with them, then there will be another decent fighting squad and Kira will probably be a man. By any means. XD
the way you let Ikkaku act is so much like him. You see who has trained him. And he is giving it to his squad. Please continue. I can't wait until the next chapter is up.
Greetings
Beni
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor kira. but ichimaru is pure evil. i feel sorry for kira. Go ikkaku! Heal is broken soul! continue. I like the way of your writing. it's beautiful. Hope to read from you soon. ^^
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tetsummi is so great! I like him a lot. Go Tetsummi! *chears for all the good guys*
*secretly also for the bad ones* XD
Please continue.
*secretly also for the bad ones* XD
Please continue.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never thought of Ikkaku paired up with Kira, but the way you write it makes me seem stupid for not seeing it before. Great piece of work! Please send me an email when you update your story!
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I loved this story!! Kira is so perfect & submissive. The light Ichimaru mentions & the intense friendship between Kira & his 3rd is amazing within the plot. I actually never liked Ikkaku, but you've made me like him now. I can't wait to see where the plot goes and what happans with Kira. Update now!!! *huggles her Kira plushie & holds it* Kira commands so too!