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for One is Too Many

by TrulyWished

schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stop playing. You know this is brilliant. Please write more. Poor Kira, it makes me so sad. :( Love it.
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My eyes are full of tears. One, because it didn't last long enough. Two, because of your awesome talent. You made the readers understand at the same time you made those snarky unnamed seats understand. Heartwrenching. As long as you write like this, I can always encourage you. :) Also if you ever need help, just email me.
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good job. Looking forward to seeing where the next chapter(s) go. Kira's one of my all time faves, so any fics with him in them are always a treat! ^-^
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schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually review, but I wanted to say how much I liked this story. I love how you portray Ikkaku: he's still a little goofy, but he's not a total buffoon, as some authors portray him. And I actually don't hate your Kira. He's my fourth-least-favorite (behind Mayuri, Aizen and Gin). I might have to rethink that! So, please continue as you've started. I like the switch in perspectives, especially when you show each character's different view of the same events. Well done.