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November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good story line and plot. you gonna continue or is it a dead story? I really hope you continue...
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes a fic staring my two fav shiniamis! I know I only read the first chapter but I like it so far. Hee I recently got into Bleach and Zaraki was like my ultimate fav character. I jsut like him! Well him and Ichigo but I so would love to read more about this pairing. And look antoher chapter! I'm off to read so thanks a lot for sharing ^^
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Double wow. Shoot, I wonder if ichigo took pictures (drools for several minutes) Um sorry my imagination went bye-bye ^^ Orohime and Chad... now that's a pairing I have never seen before but i think its cute. Chad reminds me of a big grizzly bear. :) Hee I liked it, it made me smile whihc is a good thing. next chapter!
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and yet another pairing i never thought of seeing! well short but pretty good. though i would really like to read more between kenny and ichigo ^^ i love that nickname, kenny, its cute in a childish sort of way ^^
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. i love the combination of Kenpachi/Ichigo and Orihime/Chad. Odd pairings but they work! Nice! I'd love to read some more. Hope there's some more soon!
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It has me curious, I do like the fact that you have ichigo feeling an uncertainty of his sexuality and finding himself interested in two male candidates. With Zaraki I feel you fergot to write little Yuchiru into the story because she is a part of "Kenny" as she calls him, and so she would have to be part of your story. Or at least I think so.
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so Ichigo got a full frontal of the goods huh lol. Good thing he didn't stutter like with Yoruichi lol. How typical of him to leave off with an order. The last part kinda surprised me with Orihime and Chad. Unexpected. Update soon.
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the fic so far. Not the best I've read. I think you need to work on making it longer and more detailed. Also you have some grammar and spelling problems. The spelling problems come in specifically with the names of the characters. Zaraki, is how to spell Kenpachi's surname. Tatsuki is Orihime's bestfriend. If you need any other names I would suggest that you go to http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bleach_%28manga%29. Wikipedia does a good job with names and such.
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There is so little Kenpachi love out there, I applaud you for writing some. Seriously. So. Sexy.
Keep on it, it's lovely. :3
Keep on it, it's lovely. :3
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting fic, hope to see more soon!