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schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ewww! Talk about nasty :( Never expected to see that particular pairing. I guess I can add that to my 'crack pairing I never want to see having sex' list.

Anyway, have a great birthday dear heart!! :D
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. So much drama. Happy to see the update :) I'm sure Isane was saying something like 'I miss you, I want you back, I'm gonna have your baby...' Whatever! Anyway, awesome update. Glad the Vizards decided to join. That helps out a lot.
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! More, more, more, more. The plot is getting good with the vizards possibly taking part in the fight against Captain Scumbag.
Knowing you, you might add yet another twist and get Ishida to challenge the dimwit and become a Captain, but what ever you write will be intesting and worth waiting for.

Have some Jacob's Creek Merlot. It's good and might inspire you to write.
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More twisted and sad relationships. I'm pleased that sick bastard (Kurotsuchi) is going to be beaten to a bloody pulp. It will suit him more than living. Interesting observation about the place the manga is and the strange relationships between Urhara and Aizen. What will you come up with next?

Sorry to hear you're still looking. Good luck, but the bonus is for the people who enjoy your writing. We get updates much sooner.
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I'm curious as to who the spy is. Something I'll have to think on.
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol! that has got to suck, cum in the eye! XP

Hmmm, for Zakari and Masumoto....how 'bout a walk around their home places in Rokya-town! (I can't remember the right word>>;)
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soi-Fon and Yuzu? Really? I don't how I feel about that. Makes me a little uncomfortable, like watching a kid taking a beat down for a bunch of older kids. Oh and the truth about Zakari's former relationship with Kotetsu was very enlightening. Make me wonder why she is trying so hard to hold on to him if she really doesn't want him (maybe she got knocked up and doesn't know who the father is or something). Whatever is going on, I look forward to the next chapter. I really do hope that Ichigo can convince the Vizards to come back.
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had to say that I loved the mention of Cowboy Bebop. 'I call it the Faye Valentine' was just brill. I do like this story and look forward to the next update.
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, how's the job hunting going?

I like what you're doiong with Zaraki and Matsumoto. Imagine him being sweet. I'm surprised his previous girl friend is still breathing.

Byakuya is cute again. Funny, I never saw him as cute before. Cold, arrogant, aloof, yeah, but not cute.

Look forward to the next chapter.
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Isshin was the mystery man? Wow! I was so sure it was Byakuya. Man, there is drama around every corner. I can't wait to read the next chapter :)