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I enjoyed the growing attraction with Kenpachi and Masumoto! its going slow but I'm enjoying the quick lemons here and there. This is a M/F pairing I will enjoy dearly! XD
And the Vizards appear! I'm enjoying how everyone's rallying up in preparation for the war! *But wouldn't the Vizards would demand their seatings back in the Gotei 13?
And Thank you for noting my Shun/Uki lemon request! We do need more of them! So I can't for next chapter!
Later! ^_____^

*Snerk* very quirky story, but I'm loving every chapter of it! Can't wait for the next one! XD
Also...can we see some Shunsui/Ukitake fluff pretty please? I only remember a few from the first chapters!

More and more complications. Aizen in cahoots with Urahara. Urahara going back the Seireitei and Ichigo trying to get Shingi to help. It will all end in tears, or pain or something.

Interesting update. Update when you can. I'll be waiting.

e-sake?

Love the idea of Ishida fighting Mayuri for the position of Captain of 12th Division. That would be so cool. Look forward to the next update. Keep up the stellar work and maybe some other people will tell you how much they are enjoying your story.

I've just finished reading all 11 chapters and all I can say is wow. This story has blown me away, even though I have to be up in 5 hours to go to work, I couldn't stop reading. I had to stop for a while after chapter 5, mostly to catch my breath. I was laughing so hard I kinda turned red :D Chapter 6 was brilliant, so sweet and all the other chapters, humour and pain and anger and lust all rolled into one amazing story, I can't wait for the next chapter XD

The characterisation is just getting better. The scene in 4th Division was very intense, and the description not overdone (thank the Lord or I may have required another long walk.)

I like drunk Rukia and how protective Zaraki was when she tried to um, er, grope (?) Matsumoto. Nicely done. You are interspersing the tention with humour which is fortunate for your readers so they don't start freaking or trying to hunt down Mayuri. BTW do you have his address so I can introduce him to my WW1 bayonet? I'm sure they could get very close.

I look forward to the next update.

I like how you rewrote this. The original ending of the chapter was very stark and left me decidedly anxious. The interplay between Zaraki and Matsumoto was fun. I look forward to the next chapter.

Your cold should be called 'Mayuri'. I think something that disgusting deserves that name.

*Pours e-sake*. You deserve this.

I think I need a long walk after that. A long, long walk.

Liked the first bit, especially the uneasy relationship between Toshiro and Ichigo.

Mayuri and Nemu? That's why I need the long walk.

Um.... Ur.... What????

I'm lost for words. (It happens, but not often.) That was.... unexpected but so, so funny and right. Yay! Momo demoted. Matsumoto a captain. I don't think Ikkaku will be real happy as he worships Zaraki (not like that).

This was a stunning chapter. The update is much better and really hooked me. Your writing skills, the story. Damn, it makes me so happy to read something as good as this. Thanks.

*grinning wickedly* ooo that was mean giving Karin the 2nd squad... and ummm i thought Hisagi was in the 9th squad... i may be wrong.... great job anyway... Af's doing better and I'm the one getting sick now *snicker*

Rysha and Affie