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Hey. Good to see you're back. Momo deserved everything she got. Pleased you updated.

Warm sake?

This is good. I love the way you're writing Zaraki, and so many of the characters! You have a great voice. Good work.

I've just found time to read the revision. Life keeps getting busy.
Dear me. Momo is a pain. I've always thought she was a nasty person who in indulged by too many people.
Zaraki and Matsumoto. Nice.
New chapter?

Mmmn. Nice. Sorry I didn't have a chance to review this before. Look forward to the next chapter.

Okay. smithshadow@hotmail.com.

*pours sake for you*. My laptop is now insanely jealous of you. I had to threaten it with power outages. XD

'Wow, wow, wow, wow, unbelieveable', to quote an old Kate Bush song.

I was so excited to see your update. Yay, another chapter and a good one. Byakuya cooking! Rukai plotting and sleeping in a wardrobe. Lol. *Serves e-sake.* Kempai, or proust or chinchin. *Drinks sake you served earlier.* Mmmm, nice.

One thing, don't rush your writing. Not that I'm saying this is rushed or anything, but from experience (yeah, I have some) it's unsatisfying for the author, you. I am happy to see your updates, but only when you're ready. (I have to say things like that. It's in my contract. Actually I'd be begging for another update if I thought it would work. ^.^)

Now I have to take a cold shower. Damn. I think I need some ice cubes as well.

Yes, well. *Clears throat nervously*. Good. May I ask for more? Please.

Thanks for writing this. I'm enjoying it very much.

ummmm *waits for brain to reboot * wow that was so....wow oh oh Af's gone to lala land that was hot thanks for the great citrus fun... is there going to be more?

Rysh and Af
RABID yaoi fangirls

At last, an update and it was worth the wait. Thank you for that.
Was there a hint of something between Zaraki and Matsumoto? As you may know I love them together.
Kudos.

I saw the update and hoped. Oh well, with your commute I'm not suprised, but it gave me a great excuse to read and enjoy this story again. I wait, as patiently as I can, for the next chapter. Keep up the great story telling.