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for At the Gay Bar

by DeetraTaFoy

person Zax
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yep. this was good. awesome job. ^^
person jazzy
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story to be really cute and funny and really very hot once you had Renji and ichigo going at it.

more please!
person ToRtUrE
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Originally wasn't going to read this because of the title is what also made curiosity all the more... Yes I did read it, and yes I did like it. Very good job.
person JLA
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was definitely one of my favorite Bleach stories I've read. ^_^ It has quite a few funny moments (kareoke!) and some sweet ones too. I loved the ending, throwing someone (like Renji) out right after sex is so something Ichigo would do.
person Lances
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww it was hot and humorous! *grins* Liked it!
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha awww it's cute =]. I like it. You should go check out me and my friends story too "Black Cat." It's an original and we could use any criticism you could throw at us. <3 Keep writing!
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww the ending was cute, but i doubt they'll hold out that long
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heee heee! this is all kinds of awesome.
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(after reading part 5) no. you should post it. i like it. cute. renji's all worked up that ichigo's gonna hate him, while ichigo's waiting for renji to kiss him again. so cute!!!
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
post the next chapter! this is too cute, too friggin' cute! a blushing Ichigo is so adorable...i want more!