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by speedysweetheart

person koneko
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHY DIDYOU STOP THERE! it was just geting inetesting! please! continue the story.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
flabbergashted shouldn't have an h, and the formatting of the story needs work.
Its small so write more and post something more substantial.
person ToRtUrE
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Clean up the story, it's almost unreadable.